|Reviews for Hell's Destined Soldier|
| dragon slayer of death 98 chapter 1 . 1/16
so rias is a bitch in this and a dictator, she hasn't forced her servants to whore themselves out has she
| Noivad Neao-Nefarious Izanagi chapter 11 . 10/17/2017
Oh, you lovable bastard you! Please don't end it here! This story is too good to get abandoned!
| shadow chapter 11 . 7/6/2017
I liked the chapter!
| neverendingZero chapter 11 . 3/13/2017
I'm enjoying this truly I am, Spawn (Issei) has been an interesting character so far and an interesting change from his DxD counter-part. You made Issei interesting the same way Al Simmions was. However I hope you don't make Issei exactly like Al, your fight scene with Xenovia and Irina showed Issei and Al's differences and I really liked that. Issei should kill, he's Spawn after all, however his willingness to do it should be restricted. Issei isn't a harden soldier like Al is so some hesitation should be shown. People like Violator, Overtkill, Billy, and for DxD Beezlebub and Freed should be on his 'execute on a moments notice' list, but people like Rizer should probably just be crippled, he's Spawn after all.
All the other DxD characters seem to be in character, well all except one but we'll get to that later. Rias and the gang are still they're playful, seductive, serious selves. I do hope you'll give Kiba some screen time, he only got sbout half a season of it then just faded to the background.
The story is well written, I haven't really seen any spelling mistakes.
I haven't really seen any Madoka Magika, not a huge fan of Magical girl anime/manga only watched one episode of Prisma Illya, but that was because of its connection to Fate.
Now onto the negative part of this review. I saw some lines Issei had were ripped off the Spawn animated series, while this doesn't bug me too much do to most of them being witty one liners, however I believe you can be more creative then that. He's Issei not Al.
Now other then that there is only one more problem that bugs me and yes you guessed it, its Raynare's character. Now i'm not upset you're setting up Raynare to be Issei's #1 love interest in this story with Rias and possibly Irina being the other two. However I do believe she should be played as more cruel, as she never striked me as the guilty consious type. I believe she should get there by Spawn (Issei) pulling her ass outta the fire from the fallen angels, angels, and demons looking to wack her. Her character just doesn't sit well with me right now.
Yeah man other then that I love this story. Also yes I know you haven't updated this since 2015, and yes I do hope by you seeing this review you might be inspired to continue it. I can't wait for Rias and Issei to meet and see his reaction. Will he blame her for not getting there in time? Also will he save her from Rizer or will Rias save herself.
| theLawbringer chapter 11 . 9/29/2016
are you alive? please tell me your going to continue this
| randomman626 chapter 11 . 3/26/2016
really hope this gets and update soon its been a long time coming
| xxOblivionxxx chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Please invoke the divine spawn and be done with everyone you are the writer so male M.O.M apear and end it all
| xxOblivionxxx chapter 10 . 2/25/2016
What fluffy spawn is this? I allmost died from laughing HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA i just imagined spawn gropinf breats now HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHA Spawn verse has power levels much higher and diferent then dxd so i would be carefull with what i would write
| L.B.N chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
please continue to write this magnificent story
| genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
| ulquiorra.schiffer.1291 chapter 11 . 9/15/2015
I really like this. I can't think of any DECENT Spawn crossovers.
But this, this is great. Expect a follow and favorite.
| Mr.DeadSmile chapter 11 . 8/26/2015
I like it but I feel like spawn needs to meet the magic girl*i never watched magic girl or what ever it's called but maybe I should*
| Akuma-Heika chapter 9 . 8/17/2015
Who are the Three Families? No 72 Pillars? Does that also mean no Power of Destruction?
Does Spawn’s Satan exist?
You gave us part of his looks but is it only black suit, boots and red cape?
What happened to the woman? She asked Ise for mercy but he had a mild episode and the Clown showed up.
Why is his face burned? Simmons was burned alive but Ise was stabbed? If he has the stab would why would he have the burns from Hell?
His Grandfather’s generation attacked not defended.
He does realize building up a military is expensive right? In a weak economy, weakening yourse;f is not the right idea/
If they found out he was double dealing then he would have the winner declaring war on Japan…not a great idea considering population differences.
Is the old man Cain? Is he still evil like in canon?
What does Malefic look like?
Will the other magic girls be revived?
How is Rizer a Lord? He is thirdborn? He only has political worth because the Gremory are whoring out their daughter.
Will we see Asia?
Why is she Lucifer Grayfia? Her husband is the one with the title not her after all.
So Ise was resurrected pretty quickly. Simmons was resurrected what, 5 years after his death?
I am guessing Madoka and Asia join Ise. With him able to absorb the taint for energy it would be a very useful partnership.
How will the DxD angels act? In Spawn, Heaven was nearly as corrupt as Hell.
| Galeiam chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Despite you taking away most of the main selling points of DxD this was pretty good.
Though I can't imagine you getting very far on this premise without most of your readers abandoning this.
| major wallace chapter 11 . 8/7/2015
awesome more please