Reviews for VENERATION (A Wedding-Based Story)
quentai chapter 32 . 3/27/2013
actualizar espero que no hayas dejado de lado la historia
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
I totally agree with 'Stun04' review. Me too have a real doubt about the fics relationships...
Guest chapter 31 . 2/17/2013
are u creating CLOIS story or Lois & Oliver/ Dinah & CLark. this is so so very confusing my dear, I felt odd to write there name mixed even
Guest chapter 31 . 2/17/2013
I have to agree with the review posted by 'CONFUSE' this is so confusing to read where story is CLOIS but i have created Lois Oliver relationship so off limit. I mean comeon I realy hate to read where Oliver tried to cross his limit & now Lois is dancing with him Not HER FIANCE'. I dont know that is so frustating to read,. But looks like your writing is so freaking good so that we all feel what Clark must be going through so HATS OFF for ur writing but I am not a fan of Oliver Lois where it should be Clark Lois ONLY CLOIS HERE.
alexindigo chapter 32 . 2/17/2013
Can't even begin to tell you how much I love this! Ollie is once again reminding me why I loved him with Lois so much! What he did for Bart was incredible. Can we just ditch Clark and make it a Lois/Ollie endgame? :P

Dinah is surprising me with her actions here. Talking to Clark, setting him straight (finally!) and helping Bart...she's all kinds of good. I'm missing Bruce though. Bart finally kissing Stuart in public, Kara's delight at human customs, Ollie inviting himself into a threesome with Bart and Stuart...so much laughter. And of course, as always, Lois Lane being Lois Lane for her groom, dancing for him because she knows he's uncomfortable. How could he not adore that woman? And I suspect she's going to give him a lapdance next yes? Haha! Cannot wait to see how that's going to turn out seeing as they've abstained the past mth and Clark is drunk and oh yeah, Lois is kinda hot for her man too. Bound to be interesting.

As always, thank you for sharing and for giving us an ETA on the next chapter. Cannot wait! :)
Stun04 chapter 32 . 2/17/2013
Glad to see some Clois in this chapter, and I'm really really glad you took Oliver out of the chapter as well. Him watching Lois strip and dance for Clark would have been way too much. I still think they need some boundaries in their friendship though. It was nice to see Lois in a chapter not fawning over Oliver and Bruce.
Lilbit4 chapter 31 . 2/16/2013
Ok this story is getting really confusing
Stun04 chapter 31 . 2/16/2013
Glad to see an update and another coming soon. I'm still not sure I understand where Lois is coming from at all in this fic though. I know you are trying to conveythat she and Oliver are close but this kind of close is very close to crossing a line that in real life would end up with Clark dumping Lois on her butt and no one would blame him. Why would she dance with an ex who she had a physical relationship with, who was just extremely inappropriate hours before, in front of Clark at their party? I'm also confused with the previous reference to them taking a honeymoon with their friends and family, why in the world would either Lois or Clark agree to a Buddymoon they are spending a lot of time with their friends and family before the wedding with all the activities and such. No newly married couple wants to hang out with people on their honeymoon, heck most couples barely leave their hotel rooms :P. I guess I read this and I feel like Lois has no loyalty or even deep feelings for Clark at all. She seems more concerened about Oliver and Bruce and not the fact that the people who are supposed to have his back out in the real world as Batman and Green Arrow don't even like him. If I was Lois this would cause me great concern. I don't know like I said I know this is supposed to be a Clois and Dinah/Oliver fic but if feels like a Lois/Oliver fic with Dinah as a supporting character and Clark as a very miniscule contributer to the fic. I don't know I keep reading hoping Lois will do something besides fawn all over Oliver and Bruce and prove that she cares about Clark, even a little
Laura.R chapter 30 . 1/30/2013
Its really good! Cant wait for more clois! And cant wait fot the wedding! Please carry on and update soon!
Guest chapter 30 . 1/30/2013
Glad to see Lois stand up for Clark against Bruce but her inability to decide if Clark should mean more to her than Oliver is disturbing, and now on her wedding day she's going to see a movie cause getting married isn't that big of a deal? I'm not sure why Lois is getting marrued at all? Can't wait to see where this is going to go
Lilbit4 chapter 29 . 1/30/2013
Bart and Oliver are getting on my nervs
Stun04 chapter 30 . 1/30/2013
Yay 2 updates! Though still not sure about Lois's feelings for Oliver butvI was glad to see some Close moments, though if Bart interrupts them once more I'm going to smack him haha. Lois is going to see Brave on her wedding day! I was lucky to have five minutes to myself to brush my teeth when I got married :)
OllielovesDinah chapter 28 . 1/21/2013
I love the way you write, it is detailed,descriptive,professional. I have to remind myself this is fanfiction and that I'm not reading something published. Good job and as for the update, it was fast, thanks for that. I have one other fanfiction author I am hooked on but I haven't seen anything from her in awhile so you've become my regular fix. I could so see Dinah handling that scenario the way you had her do in this last chapter but I don't know about Lois's method with Oliver. She still seems too much like the actual significant other. I have an ex I don't hate and I have my husband now and as much as I am still friends with my ex there are boundaries you just don't cross.
OllielovesDinah chapter 27 . 1/20/2013
I totally agree with Guest on this. While I totally dig this story, I read it at arm's length. It seems like the true couple here, with undying love and affection, is Lois and Oliver. Clark and Dinah are the man and woman of the day. Lois's constant easy distraction by Oliver's demeanor during her happy day and Ollie's preoccupation with Clois seem to be jealousy like he wants to be the one front and center. This doesn't sound like bestest friend concern but true love's ache and Clark and Dinah are in the way.
alexindigo chapter 28 . 1/21/2013
Wow! What can I say that I haven't already said. I LOVE this story and this chapter? Wow. I'm glad that Ollie finally forgave himself and realized that he too was 'victim' in all of this. Dinah (who I don't usually like but am starting to warm up to) was spot on in trying to get Oliver to understand how he too was wronged in all of this. I LOVE that Bruce's affection for Lois extends to protecting her from whomever that caused her tears. I'm pretty sure that Ollie is right in that had Bruce been around, The Blur would've gotten the beating of his life (oh how I wish that was a reality).

Once again, a beautiful chapter describing the inexplicable relationship between Lois and Oliver. That 'he doesn't love her like I do' line? Just about broke my heart right there...THAT'S exactly what I mean when I look back at their friendship. I truly believe that Clark will never be able to understand that. I forgot to mention this in my last review, but the part about Lois having the same reaction had a woman done the same to Ollie? SPOT ON! Lois has always been fiercely protective of Oliver, going so far as to get angry and Clark for not telling her about Ollie's attempt at suicide, so I absolutely believe this to be true. Dinah is right when she said that Lois can't help but forgive Clark just as how Ollie can't help but not. I always look at it as how you know when your best friend/sister/brother get back together with their ex whom you know broke their heart, you are still cautious but you can't understand why your friend/sis/bro isn't? And then people always say that it's the best friend who has trouble forgiving more than the ex? I don't know if any of that makes sense. :P

I do hope Bruce and Diana get things sorted. I don't think Lois is in any position to talk to Bruce after this, at least not for awhile, so I guess it'll only be after the wedding? I love Bruce Wayne. I really do. He really is someone whom I think would be perfect for Lois Lane if SV Clark Kent hadn't (somewhat) gotten his act together. Can't wait to see what Lois and Lucy have to talk about. While I understand Ella's comments about no man being an angel, I do hope that the message that Lois takes from that is that everyone makes mistakes so please have high standards and NOT that everyone makes mistakes therefore you should put up with jackasses who lie to you for close to a year and don't deserve you no matter how much they beg. :P

As always, thank you for sharing. :)
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