Reviews for Illuminated
twitchytwain chapter 1 . 2/22
Why didn't you contnue this? I really like it
PendantOfGoddes chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
You portrayed the emotions very well!

Good job!
kite strings chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
ugh where's the companion piece?
everysinglenight chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
You did a really good job of capturing the emotional workings of Bonnie and Damon. In just this one chapter, I think that even someone who doesn't watch the show could get a pretty good idea of who they are as individuals.
caress of shadows chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
So...I just loved this story. I hope you think about writing a sequel.
RB chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
I can't believe no one else has reviewed this, I know others have to have read it!

I loved this, i loved the way you brought them together. And this was the first time someone wrote bonnies character and I didn't have that moment of eurgh what have you done. You wrote her perfectly she wasn't pathetic or annoyingly in your face look at me im bad*** witch with a ridiculous sense of right and wrong.

She was just a person, going through things who makes mistakes. Her being a witch isnt the main focus. If you find the motivation, you should look at continuing it. It ended abruptly thats the only criticism.

If you continue I would love it if you make ot awkward for both of them instead of following the trend of damon flaunts it becomes obsessed and persues her. I reckon you could make it subtle and much more believable based on what i just read.

xXx
Hellzz-on-Earth chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
No regrets Bonnie. For that moment Damon was all yours and he made you feel safe.
I'm late to the BAmon fanfic game, but love playing catch up.
Thank you for sharing.
Redlioness62 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This needs just one more chapter, please.
writerinlaymansterms chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
This is good. You should write more. You have a talent with words.