|Reviews for Protecting What's His|
| Arachnide chapter 1 . 7/31
Actually, i really liked this fanfic. It was very good, you did an outstanding job with it. Must be one of the best of its kind i have read so far. Its a shame you wont do the other chapters , though. With your writing skills i am sure they would turn out as awesome ,if not more amazing, as this one. Anyway, i loved this fanfic and in my opinion it was great
| 1sunfun chapter 1 . 7/16
| 1Abigail1 chapter 1 . 5/20
LMAO! Absolutely loved this story! It was hilarious (Steve chocked as Natasha's eyebrows flew up to her hairline) and the writing was on point. Great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19
I liked how you made sure the ai's and bots acted human. 3
| Anon11 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Why do you think this is bad? This is freaking gold! Nay, platinum! This is one of the best things I've ever read and deserves some gold stars.
I seriously feel like I should pay you for having wrote this and then posting it online where I could read it.
I can't, but still.
This is awesome, and you ned to know this.
| Dragon of Selene chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
...What would be awesome is if you had the Avengers, in this same verse, read Oceanbreeze's Standard Procedure. This one shows how protective Tony is of JARVIS, and Standard Procedure has JARVIS doing the same.
| bookgirl113 chapter 1 . 1/5/2016
I have too much to say to type it out so I'll just say that Fury is a despicable idiot who doesn't even learn from the mistakes he knows about ahead of time! And you're a great author:)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
Suicide my ass. The truth is not always so called 'bullying'. People are far too sensitive and need to learn not to have a break down at the drop of a pin.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
This was great! You should do the other two chapters too! Please?
| thisisaccountisnolongerinuse chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
My god, I loved it! You're writing is great, WAY better than mine. I loved this story, since I loved the story this was based on, and you did an absolutely AMAZING job at it! Keep up the good work! Oh! And here's a word of advice: Keep doing this mini-rants exactly or resembling this one! Like you said, you could be saving lives! Keep it up, and here's a cookie (::)
| twistedhalfsmileM chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
First thing, I ADORE this story. Second thing, I thought that it was written perfectly and that you pulled off the characters masterfully.(I love how you pulled off Thor, Tony and Jarvis especially, my only complaint is the complete lack of Loki, because although 'why the hel-lo kitty would he be there' I'm just a little curious about his reaction. Also I thought 'where's Pepper?' but I loved how you wrote this) It felt very real, which makes for an amazing story. If this was a book, I'd beg, borrow and/or steal to have a copy. Thanks, it's amazing!
| Diary-of-madness chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Amazeballs. Have you any plans for a sequel?
| andysanime chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Oh Fury of course you learn nothing *sigh*. Ah well, your funeral!
| bloodshound chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
good story used as a base to make another good story.
| RandominatorOwl chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
Nice! I've always seen Tony as considering JARVIS as a family member and being very protective and it's great to see it written out like this.