Reviews for The Prince of Magic
Alzeno chapter 1 . 3/10
Bojack2011 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
it is good
koper chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
If his sister was framed for killing their's father, shouldn't naruto become king?
So his nation almost ceased to exist and he become teacher instead of helping them? 0_o
Well anyway hope you will continue this fanfic
Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
There are a lot of articles missing and several suffixes are wrong. The phrasing could be better in a lot of sentences and some suffixes are missing all together. Also you used articles in places that they were not needed. Look out for these and have someone beta your story to reduce the frequency of these errors
unknown chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Please let Naruto be with Konoka please think of how strong their children will be and also they make a good match cause one; his a prince and konoka is a princss, two; Konoka is sweet and caring and Naruto is loyal. and finally three; she's very kincky (check her original info and her Negima?! info so trust me)
fairy.tail's.storm.king chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
I hope konoko and the bird-girl is pair with naruto
nick chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
How old is naruto? First 8 then 7 next19 instead of 22!Make up your mind man.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
when the update
Cerulean Knight chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Hm, seems cool so far. I hope you continue this story, it has potential.
darthrevan chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
when the update
darthrevan chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
i love it update please i beg you
quest chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
when the update
donovan123456789 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
not bad i want you to come out with the next chapter *_* T.T
Guy chapter 1 . 6/18/2013
I like the 't wait to see what you do next
Rezuvious chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Entheofushia not Entheofush
Dean not den

Arika was the queen of Ostia, her left eye was green not blue the right one was the blue eye

as others stated when you introduced Naruto you said he was 5 then Naruto said he was 8 after the 2 year time skip you said Naruto was 7 the only age you got right was after the 12 year timeskip with him being 19.

other then that there are plenty of grammar mistakes.
but a good story anyway
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