Reviews for Jessica and Linda
Guest chapter 18 . 6/7/2017
Linda was not Lucas's and Amelia's auntie, to be an auntie to Jessica's children Linda would have had to been Jessica's sister and she wasn't, Linda was simply a friend that Jessica and the kids left with.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
Role-play format is not allowed and it doesn't really work.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2017
What does that other girl have to do to get you to take her name down off your summary, I think you should do what she wants, it's bullying her as you aren't listening to her. I found Jessica's character not in character, the show gave no indication that Jessica's family were vegetarians. I honestly don't know why you had Linda refer to Jess as "big sister" they weren't and I found that really weird . So wasn't really keen on this. Can you just please do as that girl asks, because I think it's unfair that you are accepting the reviews and not listening to what is written in them. :(
Hannah chapter 1 . 1/15/2017
Jessica would not tell Linda she was beautiful, although she did use "shush" when in a scene with baby Harry and Zoe in the staff room, "shush" was more Adam, than Jess. When Jess seen Lucas and Amelia on camera, Adam went: "Shush, we will get them back, Jess, but on your terms. " and in terms of the vegetarian chicken, I think you may have meant quorn chicken, which is a sub for meat.
finallyexploded chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
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Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 31 . 12/22/2012
Shortest marriage ever.
Sam2014Nicholls chapter 28 . 12/1/2012
this was such an emotional chapter, i loved it
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 26 . 11/29/2012
Linda was a Cow to Jessica. I feel sorry for her
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 20 . 11/26/2012
Jessica you need to greive for him, not say your glad he's gone. Linda what is it with you and hicups? Good chapter I enjoyed it.
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 19 . 11/25/2012
Oh my God. I certainly wasn't expecting that. I'm intrigued please update soon.
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 18 . 11/25/2012
I enjoyed that. I'm glad Jessica is looking out for Linda and letting her stay at the house. Looking forward to your next update
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 15 . 11/10/2012
I hope Jessica's going to be OK.
Sam2014Nicholls chapter 10 . 11/5/2012
lovley chapter and story :-)
Sam2014Nicholls chapter 9 . 11/4/2012
such a great friendship :-)
Sam2014Nicholls chapter 8 . 11/4/2012
linda is such a child-lol we love her like that though
loved when it said: random person: WELL DONE LOVE
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