|Reviews for Double-edged Sword|
| Kuro kaze no aka kira chapter 17 . 2/25
What a dark turn-out this ending had been. No, no, I'm not disappointed. It's just.. It feels weird to not have a sort-of happy ending. Turned out okay though, about 7/10 stars?
| Vaughan chapter 17 . 2/11
Truly an excellent piece of literature. This is an incredibly well written alternate ending that is so believable and well constructed I would be more than happy if it was canon as it is of professional standing in my personal opinion.
Thank you for creating this.
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/19
This was very good.
| Worker72 chapter 17 . 1/3
I don't think anyone wants to see Sugou dressed up as a Butterfly again. Everyone has issues. Never the end!
| Worker72 chapter 8 . 1/2
I don't think anyone was sure how strong The Fatal Scythe was. That was just Kirito guessing.
| Worker72 chapter 2 . 12/23/2013
Better then cannon. I would have quit the guild as well. Especially once it was clear Heathcliff was treating players like possessions.
| Evelhundrege chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
| Electricprincess889 chapter 17 . 12/9/2013
This is really an amazing story. It flowed seamlessly and was very well written. Can't wait to see more of your stories.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 17 . 12/3/2013
A good story.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 16 . 12/2/2013
A very good ending for SAO.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 15 . 12/1/2013
A chapter of serious contemplation, of decisions on how to live your life. Good.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 14 . 12/1/2013
Good to see the boss is similar to what I recognize, now, but what an interesting development with Heathcliff now...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 13 . 12/1/2013
Good to see Kirito is working again, and a close call there with the boss. Lizbeth may be onto something though, and that is worrying.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 12 . 12/1/2013
Some contemplation and nerves, and the beginning of the end.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 11 . 11/30/2013
I respect a storyline that remembers the little details. So I respect your story.