|Reviews for Double-edged Sword|
| crossfire922 chapter 2 . 4/21
Also if he reaaaaaally killed someone their name disappears from the board in town 1 hence proving or disproving Kirito's claim.
| SolEclipse chapter 17 . 4/11
| SilverBlader chapter 17 . 2/18
Wow, just amazing. The world building, character development, and storyline was amazing–truly what the series should have been.
The ending was amazing. Even though it’s open ended, you get the impression that the ending is just the beginning of a “new game” as Kayaba put it.
Speaking of him, Kayaba’s motives here were borderline psychopathic but at the very least sociopathic. But it really explains his character. It was so much better than that “I can’t even remember” bull in canon.
That ending though and the parallels between Kirito and Kayaba.
Is it strange that I have envisioned Kirito becoming just like Kayaba post Fairy Arc?
He claimed he didn’t want to be like him in canon, but throughout the fight he fights just like Kayaba (cold and calculated). Kirito also had an equally pragmatic personality in SAO and has Kayaba’s genius at games. He also feels more comfortable in the virtual world.
This story only emphasized their parallels further.
And the Asuna’s real world pressures were handled marvelously along with her own goal to return to the real world.
Klein’s genuinely glass half full, determinator personality was handled brilliantly. Canon gives you the impression he’s as interesting a character if not more than Kirito considering he goes from noob to guild leader that gets his entire team through the game.
Anyways, great job!
| Lady NeverAfterNon chapter 5 . 2/9
This is literally the best SAO fic I have ever read. Holy cats. Your story development, character building, dialog- amazing. Great job!
| EtherealTulip chapter 16 . 1/24
definitely a better ending for sao
| EtherealTulip chapter 10 . 1/24
| Spermmnan chapter 17 . 10/9/2017
You should enter this in the the official SAO manga!
| Coolboss chapter 16 . 10/9/2017
So beautiful I'm crying!
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/12/2017
This was a pointless read it left little to be resolved you are a horrible story ender not story writer but story ender
| Apex85 chapter 11 . 6/10/2017
GOD DAMMIT! WHY DIDN'T YOU LET HER STAY DEAD?!
| Apex85 chapter 10 . 6/10/2017
HAHAAHHAHA! DIE LOLI DIE!
| forestghost chapter 17 . 6/10/2017
really enjoyed reading!
| forestghost chapter 16 . 6/10/2017
(im not crying your crying)
i love this fic
| forestghost chapter 10 . 6/10/2017
that was brutal
really enjoying reading!
| Muaradia chapter 10 . 4/5/2017
I can't believe you killed Silica you monster! But writing is really good!