You killed Silica! You bastards! (south park reference, anyone?)

this was a really well written story. I loved the characters and the detail in the action scenes. Great job!

Really nice story, hope u will write more :)

I'm Sorry, but to be blunt, this was just a fucking terrible fic, it was just awful, while it was well written, it didint capture the SAO feeling and I downright disliked everything about it. I apologize, it's just my honest opinion.

It had brilliant plot dips and awesome character.

It made me cry. The feeling of nostalgia was strong. very strong.

Thank you for the opportunity to read this. I loved it.

I really, really like your version of the story better than the anime. It actually stayed on track with the 'clear all the floors to win' plot that the anime didn't really focus on, and you gave the other characters like Agil, Klein, and Silica more appearances and importance too. And Asuna was pretty awesome in your fic. You kept her in-character and gave her a pretty important role instead of making her another damsel in distress.

Nice story.

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic, from beginning to end.
A most unexpected but much welcomed adaption of the SAO storyline, I am glad that you took the time to craft this fic.
Compliments aside, very well done indeed.

I like the storyline, but it would really be better if Kirito just 'walked away silently and coolly' instead of falling to the groud in despair. I know that's the more realistic version, but hey, no protagonist is normal

God Damn you, why did you have to kill Silica, and so suddenly.

Good Fic

Splendid!
I loved this! Too bad i finished it in one go, but still one of the greatest FanFics i have ever read
(i noticed you had to change stuff so the story would fit but it went well)
I would love it if you could write another SAO FanFic

very cute story, nice plot. pretty IC, best sao fanfic I've read so far :) however, what is the differnce between dual welding and double edge? thanks :)

Fantastic! amazing! no words can describe!

nice