|Reviews for Double-edged Sword|
| AquaJet chapter 9 . 11/10/2012
Somehow I feel like this isn't the last of the 30-second Potion of Invulnerability.
and you scared the living daylights out of me when Asuna, Agil, and Klein had low health. I was about to cry if it wasn't for Asuna's determination and badassery. (but OMG KLEIN, so worried that Kirito would kill him while calling Asuna pretty pfffffffffft I love him so much xD) I thought he was amazing for reaching out to Asuna to keep her safe. I just wanna give him a lot of squishes! :3
WAY TO GO KIBAOU, YOU OFFICIALLY WON THE DOUCHEBAGGERY AWARD. But more seriously, I love how you expanded/emphasized the idea of factions within the Army. In the anime, it seemed like Kibaou's faction wasn't really that big and they were just rebels that needed to be put down.
Also, I know Thinker is being cool/boss in this chapter. But I get the feeling that he's actually going to talk instead of engage in a duel. Also, I love Yulier! (but I feel like he's gay for thinker now that he's not female :'D)
NU PLOT, COME BACK. I'VE ALREADY BEEN CRIPPLED FROM SILICA'S BIG BRO CRUSH. (don't worry too much about me, Froggy, I don't think I'll ever like that idea of a brother complex for Silica)
| KurukiXV chapter 8 . 11/10/2012
Fantastic story! Can't wait to read more!
| IarIz chapter 8 . 11/10/2012
WHAT A CLIFTHANGER...
now i curious ...
in middle of battle and it suddenly end of chapter...
oh well a great fic indeed and ill wait for next chap:-)
i say "keep up the good work"
| IarIz chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
ahaha that was funny... me to want to say it
"marry me, kirito" LOL
| FoodForDays chapter 8 . 11/10/2012
Yulier is female.
| AquaJet chapter 8 . 11/9/2012
There's so much to say for this chapter (I don't think I'll be able to say it all). I'm amazed at the fighting scene (I would never be able to write as much as you did pfft) but everyone was so wonderful and amazing that I almost cried a little. Asuna is so adorable too (due to that one line: "One thing was certain: they couldn't leave Kirito to fight the Level 75 boss on his own. Not after this experience; it was just too lonely and scary." asdfghjkl, Asuna makes me want to give her so many hugs
(BUT I'M SO HAPPY. SHE'S SO COMPETENT. IT'S CAUSE KIRITO COCKBLOCKS HER AWESOMENESS ALL THE TIME. DAMMIT KIRITO.)
| AquaJet chapter 7 . 11/9/2012
I like this meeting between Kabaya/Kirito. They're so chill (or at least act like it) for people who are going to fight each other at the last stage. And somehow, I kind of want to have that experience of going into a virtual world like SAO (except without the dying part, you know. I DON'T NEED TO FEEL THAT ALIVE.)
I would marry Klein. JUST SAYING. HE'S SO COOL AND AWESOME 8D but omg Yulier 8DDDDDD
I agree so much with Asuna. I like all my romance and stuff but I have more important things to worry about xD
but OMG Froggy. NO YOU DIDN'T (butyesyoudid) PLEASE DON'T KILL ANYONE. DON'T MAKE ME DROWN IN TEARS D8
| AquaJet chapter 6 . 11/9/2012
DAMMIT KABAYA. KIRITO HAD SO MANY QUESTIONS.
But seriously, I feel like that encounter is that one point where Kirito's destiny is sealed. It doesn't matter that he's locked up, he WILL fight Kabaya at the end (It made me feel like epicness is going to happen)
AND WHOA. I feel so much more for Asuna (It's like you're adding more layers and I'm peeling off the onion skin layers more slowly. I'M JUST GOING TO HAVE SO MANY FEELS D:)
but omg, that one guy that wanted to go flower picking with her. You can tell he's such a gentle person (loljksno.) but I looooooove Agil/Klein
Silica! (way to make me feel bad about myself for not liking her more during her episode, FROGGY) but why would you make Yulier a boy!? D: I know there are a bunch of girls, but there are rarely any high ranking girls. (but meh, maybe it was for the best. It seems like she had the hots for her boss anyway :I)
And as always, I enjoy reading all the little details you add in c:
| Blackbird0 chapter 8 . 11/9/2012
Ooh, exciting! I can't wait to see how this will turn out! Please update again soon:)
| AKidLikeMe chapter 8 . 11/9/2012
Thanks for updating again haha i laughed at queer rats
| EchizenRyomaLover chapter 8 . 11/9/2012
I was always excited to think about what would happen if Kirito had finished all 100 floors. XD I mean, think about it, he'd have more skills and whatnot by the time he faces Kayaba in the final floor. XDDDDDDDD I'm sorry. More fan girling. But I really do want him to be the one saved this time. The plot thickens! :DDDD
| awesome-sadist chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
wow. you update fast! :D
nice chap, by the way! :)
| Blackbird0 chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
Ooh, can't wait for the boss fight! Update soon please:)
| AKidLikeMe chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
I thought Yulier was a girl? Though I guess it doesn't really matter right now. Kirito has a wide variety of friends doesn't he? I'm sure when the group mentions about what happened to Kirito, to Silica I'm sure she will be willing to help them.
| EchizenRyomaLover chapter 7 . 11/8/2012
HOHOHOHO, and the group gets into more trouble...:P
I honestly agree with you that the bromance in this series is seriously lacking...and it all the more frustrates me because I am a hardcore yaoi fan girl. XD