|Reviews for Double-edged Sword|
| Harumaki chapter 5 . 11/7/2012
I agree: Kirito's intelligence and attention to detail are probably some of my favorite characteristics about him. That part in the anime where he deduces the identity of Heathcliff as Kayaba was really great ("But I had forgotten one important piece of psychology..." GOOD STUFF 8D)
(also, if no one has mentioned this yet, I do believe it's Kayaba Akihiko, not Kabaya. just thought you'd want to know)
| RH96 chapter 6 . 11/7/2012
Great chapter! Also I can't wait to see what happens.
| EchizenRyomaLover chapter 6 . 11/7/2012
I never really did see Kayaba (or is it really Kabaya) Akihiko as a purely bad guy. I guess an overdoes of logic turned him into the man he is now, but I totally sympathize with him (besides, he indirectly made a man out of Kirito, so I ain't complaining XD).
Kibaou marrying Silica?! *vomits* Bad image. Bad.
| Blackbird0 chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
Wow, this is so good, please write more!
| HopelessRomanticSinceBirth chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
Yes, finally a story that makes sense. I've been looking for stories like this. Finally a good plot twist to a canon character fic. Do continue and update soon :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
Really enjoying this! I especially love your Kirito! I like that he's smart. The furniture bit cracked me up! Not to mention Klein's proposal ;) More please!
| EchizenRyomaLover chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
Badass character who is a total wimp: Lelouch XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Is the part about the furniture true? Or is it another one of your ideas? I seriously can't distinguish anymore! XDDD They're just that awesome. XDDDDDD
And yes, Kirito's hot intelligence is his greatest attribute. XDD (I'm going to cut this review short because all you're going to read now will be my fangirling XD)
| Deusand chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
| RH96 chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what Kabaya Akihiko does. Also I agree on what you said about Kirito. Till next chapter!
| AquaJet chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
OMGOMGOMGOMG I LOVE KIRITO. HE'S JUST SO ADORABLE AND KNOWLEDGEABLE. LET ME LOVE HIM 8D (Or do I have to go through Klein and Asuna first? *shot*)
You know, now that I know that Kuradeel placed the boulder up front to block them, IT MAKES PERFECT SENSE. I ruled him out because I thought he wasn't too bright to do anything xD (BUT FFFF ASUNA. WHY YOU NO ANSWER KIRITO'S MESSAGE AND START SLAPPING KURADEEL?)
Also when they were informed of the new quest to tame beasts. I JUST KNEW THAT SILICA WOULD SHOW UP FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER 8D ALSO, don't leave me in suspense. I wanna know what happens with Kayaba Akihiko/Kirito! WHAT'S GOING ON? D8
| Kagehana.Tsukio chapter 5 . 11/5/2012
Kayaba's just a mindfuc*er.
| AquaJet chapter 4 . 11/5/2012
I see your typos :3 *shot*
The completely relevant ending, BY FAR, has won all the awards. All the other chapters can go home *shot* (BUT LOL, I highly doubt Kirito is very interested in Asuna's cycle. whut a troll.)
BUT A LITTLE MORE SERIOUSLY, the npc kid is such a butt. he is adorable though xD I love how you mention that Kirito is more for story/plot in games while Klein wants to fight and skip all the dialogue. YOU'RE SO CLEVER TOO. I would have never thought of other characters actually blocking the pathway especially since there's a (possibly) important quest there.
I really want to see who the villain(s) are 8D
Also, this isn't a major thing but I noticed how they all play rock-paper-scissors for the bed. If this was an anime/manga, usually Asuna would have been on the bed or the other two would be thinking of pervy things because they're stuck/alone with a girl (but nothing would happen). I think it's more realistic that people wouldn't pay too much attention to that.
I love the details about the virtual game experience curve c: Gives me a sense that they're actually working very hard.
| EchizenRyomaLover chapter 4 . 11/5/2012
Somehow, that drabble just cheered me up from the depths of homework despair. XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
I am very very very curious as to who is getting in our party's way. XD And of course I am super worried about Kirito. :D
| Harumaki chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
Klein's first words are so true. Grinned at Asuna's "Wait, shut up" and Agil's last line. Particularly enjoyed the brief discourse about how Kirito might've been the type to enjoy games for both story and gameplay while Klein... wasn't. idk why though. Maybe because I can totally see Klein skipping the cutscenes in real life.
pls update soon kthnx
| RH96 chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
LOL! Eat up! Great chapter I can't wait for 5!