Reviews for Double-edged Sword
flash5509 chapter 17 . 1/23/2016
amazing. :)
Ppsh chapter 17 . 12/31/2015
A well written story. Unfortunately the ending is just depressing. It ends on such a low note. I feel as if Kirito and Asuna have completely drifted apart - that sooner or later she will go on to her career or whatever and forget about him. That's the impression it gives. It's possibly more realistic than the canon ending, but just so miserable at the same time. I don't understand why you would do that - I mean I guess due to the changes you made, they didn't spend as much time bonding in SAO; never got married or lived together, Yui never appeared...

I guess it's very good writing, but I don't really like the direction you took this in either. It just seems largely the same as canon with all of the really positive conclusions stripped out of it. Mm, just depressing.
AngelAera chapter 17 . 12/15/2015
Absolutely amazing story! Only wish Kirito could have met Asuna personally at the end, would have been great. Nevertheless, a great read. Kudos to you!
Ald3r chapter 9 . 12/13/2015
Why is Yulier a guy?
Ezrealus chapter 17 . 11/28/2015
Amazing. Absolutely amazing. Really professional level writing, with an obviously well thought out plot and very developed characters, and just enough deviation from canon to give the story a different feel to it. The only thing that irked me (if you could call it that) was the lack of closure in terms of Asuna's relationship with Kirito, the omission of an in-person meeting made me kind of sad, might have made a better ending than the World Seed scene, since I've always felt the SAO arc was centered around their relationship anyways. Aside from that one little thing I enjoyed reading your story from start to finish. Thanks for the ride!
Moka Cocoa chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
I'm so confused tbh
wolfenergy17 chapter 17 . 10/7/2015
I really enjoyed reading this tale. The character's personalities stayed true to canon, yet at the same time they progressed and developed further than the did in the original storyline. The idea you came up with for the plot was very good and the way you put the plot idea into words is incredibly well executed. Your writing is amazing, as it was in your other two SAO fanfics I read. I would read more of your stories, but the only fandom that I am a part of that you write for is SAO. Sadly, this means I have read all the fanfictions written by you that I can. Either way, I want to thank you for writing and posting such a well written Fanfiction. So, thank you.
mutecebu chapter 10 . 9/6/2015
mutecebu chapter 9 . 9/6/2015
wooo good chapter! Man I thought Klein wasn't gonna survive this one.
mutecebu chapter 8 . 9/6/2015
Chapter 2's trial was a little iffy, how the characters reacted to that, but the story's ranged from good to great since. I liked Asuna's perspective in the Teleport-PK trap.
mutecebu chapter 2 . 9/6/2015
The first chapter had the best quality prose I've seen in a SAO fanfic so far.
The-Mrning-Star chapter 17 . 9/2/2015
A truly outstanding story thank you as a reader in was hopelessly enthralled
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 11 . 8/23/2015
little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 10 . 8/23/2015
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