Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin Selection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I realy like Your writing Style! but is it not a bit much how Harry is dumber than a Rock in the first 5 Chapters ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore did treat the Slytherins unfairly. If he was going to award Harry and co. huge numbers of points (fair enough), then he should have done it before all the decorations were in Slytherin colors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() For another chapter of this, I would sell you my soul. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tee hee that was most excellent. Wonderful little story. It is interesting to imagine what Harry would have done differently if he was so desperate to keep a friend. Wonderful work, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a major problem with this fic. You've made Harry and Draco best friends but there has been absolutely no benefit to this; Harry clearly doesn't like Draco and Draco hasn't helped Harry adjust to the Wizarding World at all, it's boring, there's no character development. |
![]() ![]() I've read the first seven chapters and was thoroughly impressed, excellent rendition of Slytherin Harry! I'm looking forward to reading your version of Year Two! Good luck writing in the future! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Superb beginning! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Slytherin Harry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Skip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Harry will have some problems with the Ðeathly Hallows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's a review, good story. Not excruciatingly repeating the year's events |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very well written story! I like this slytherin Harry very much, you pictured him quite interesting! I also like that you didn't write Draco too nice and out of canon! Really good work! Especially the snape Harry relationship and the bit about Harry not being able to retrieve the philosophers stone! I am excited about what the following years will bring! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am off to read the next story. This one was excellent. Too short is my only criticism. I would have happily read another 100k words of Harry's adventures this year. |