|Reviews for Past Mistake|
| funniefriend1245 chapter 28 . 1/25
Hi there! I liked this story a lot! Thanks for writing it. I think that you did a good job with Halt and Pauline. I especially liked your characterization of Crowley. You did a really great job with him. Your OCs were pretty good, too. I'm definitely going to check out your other stories now!
| Birds on the Sunset chapter 28 . 6/1/2013
Aw what a gorgeous story. I cannot tell you how glad I am he came back to Pauline. You made me like her (I never really did after the book) but I was petrified he'd bring Fianna back with him.
Poor Halt. I was reading and thinking this girl really likes to torture Halt. I was so worried about him and all the injures.
Great story though. Really good.
| Rizamute chapter 28 . 5/17/2013
It was a good fix but not one of your best ones I'm going to go read te Gilan one you are talking about keep up the food work you are a great writer :)
| Guinevere137 chapter 2 . 5/9/2013
They are an old married couple...even if they haven't been married long! You even make argue like one! lol :)
| Guinevere137 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
This has me so captivated!
| Mychele O'Carrik of Clonmel chapter 28 . 5/5/2013
Yay! I think this is rlly good. I wouldn't have been able to make halt so...Halt-y. I would've felt all bad for Pauline and made him too sweet to her. XP I think he's very IC. It maeks me a little mad at him, especially the way he just tossed her ring on the table like that, but she knows him well enough to read between the lines. I hope things get better for them from here!
Btw, u haz a Gilan story? And I is not reading teh Gilan-ness :O (shows what a lousy FF friend I am...) I will read it. :3
God bless, Mychelewhoisnotloggedin
| SeekerMaxia chapter 28 . 5/5/2013
Not gonna lie; the ending felt a bit rushed, but I liked how Halt and Pauline patched things up. I bet you're happy that this story is out of your life now :)
| Ranger indecisive chapter 28 . 5/5/2013
Oh lol halts gonna get mini halts it wasn't that bad an ending really but maybe a little rushed and way love this story from start to end... is halt your favourite cose he is like in all your stories and sometimes the main character
| Ranger Robbin chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
Hehe. Still like it. Keep writing !
| FarmersDaughter chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
So they're patching things back up! YAY! (:
| RandomYoshi chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
It was a good ending. It all came a little fast for me though, just a tad confusing when they were discussing Fianna. I was expecting a longer chapter with a more advanced conclusion. I'm not saying it was bad, it just wasn't Bralt. But we all cut corners, eventually. Even I do.
Looking forward to what you have in mind for Gilan's Frist Year, though!
| flaminglake chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
Actually Halt, I thought "so you only came back because I'm going to have a baby," was a pretty fair statement. Is this the end of the whole story? It wasn't too bad, except I thought it changed from the awkward frustration to a happy ending quite fast. If I were Pauline, I'd have held a much bigger grudge. Mind you, if I were Pauline, I would have married the other of the two rangers. Anyway, at least Halt fessed up about Fianna quickly. Good job Bralt, another original, interesting story done.
| SkittlesGal chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
Hahahahahahahaha I love the way you wrote that! I just can't... Haha I can't get over how great that all looks in my mind :) I liked that ending, short and sweet :)
| RandomYoshi chapter 27 . 4/22/2013
Crowley to the rescue!
I swear Braltian stories are SO unpredictable!
| SeekerMaxia chapter 27 . 4/22/2013
Another great chapter- I liked how you had Halt talk his way out of the situation instead of fighting :)