|Reviews for Rejected|
| DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
Okay, this story just proved to me that you have no soul. I should NEVER have read this story, because you based it on one of Broomstick Flyer's stories. Sometimes, I enjoy her stories, but other times, they make me want to puke out pieces of my small intestine with the amount of Hermione-bashing they include. This story has also only increased my absolute PSYCHOTIC HATRED for Luna Lovegood!
| cassikat chapter 1 . 10/1/2017
A good story, certainly faithful to broomstick flyer's original, and definitely the only way to get Lunar Harmony out of that mess. I still have a problem, though: Why the heck is Harry fixated on Hermione? Especially why is he fixated on her to the point where he can't 'love' anyone else? Hate to tell ya, but that's not love. That's obsession. Oh, there may be love in there, but mostly it looks like athankfully!passive obsession. Bit creepy, really. Still, overall a good story. Kudos!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
*Grabs the screen and shakes it with his face up close* Buuulllllllshhhiiiiiit. There are so many things wrong with this and the cliches. Magically forgiving people, magically after five years still caring enough to do this, seemingly waiting five years in a terrible relationship after a "curse" to say anything to the person that did it, No Porn, being able to use multiple names instead of just living together without getting married.
I could even go on but I won't. The spelling and grammar is fine but the rest? Try to go off the course once in awhile instead of treading such used ground, or at least give up some smut to make up for the lack of creativity.
Now I know this story is a few years old but does that matter? Not a bit.
| Calmzone1 chapter 1 . 9/16/2017
| Mmars69 chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
Use the flames to roast hotdogs, better yet, just ignore the rudeness.
I liked you take on Broomstick's idea. Put on your asbestos underwear and keep writing.
| Rebmul chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
and then ron died form magical std's and everyone lived happily ever after
| MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
| FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
Very Interesting and well written.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
Just pure an unaltered stupidity, by just state she leave Harry to go with trashy pure blood is simple crap, same stupidity as canon.
| D.Mentor chapter 1 . 1/1/2017
A good story, thank you for writing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
| Kai chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
The sad thing is, it wouldn't be OOC for the Weasel.
| Melanie chapter 1 . 6/9/2016
A... very moving read. Thank you so much for sharing this.
| desireejones99 chapter 1 . 6/5/2016
wow amazing treatment of the story, great ending
| sausageman1997 chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
wow that was brutal - send it to JK Rowling - let her think about what she did...