|Reviews for Death Angel|
| me chapter 13 . 11/13/2002
could be WAY better!
it's much too short. it's not even a story. more like an outline for a story.
and what's with the diary thingie? is for fanfiction you know, not diary
the plot is not really that original and it's VERY guessable. you also leave plot holes practically everywhere. what the bacground for the whole angel concept? the great one and such? it needs one hell of an explaining to make it belieable
honestly your so called 'story' sound like you just pull stuff out of nowhere to put kurapika in certain situation that you want.
okay, so maybe you like him a lot. but geez... sorry for saying but this is such a waste of space.
stil, i'm reviewing cos i think this could be WAY better. if it's hopeless, i wouldn't even review.
| fairy gurl chapter 9 . 8/24/2002
lemons and bananas go good together!
so do cherys!_
0,o bad (kurapika x hisoka)*shuters*
bad! bad image! you are so MEAN!
| PrincessFlorea chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
If I remember correctly... the City of Light is Paris, France. But I went to the City of Life.
| BlackRose404 chapter 1 . 8/15/2002
i cant wait to read next time. it cracks me up! hahaha!
| fairygurl chapter 5 . 8/9/2002
_ what is the city of light?
when will you be back from vacation?
| me agein evil smile chapter 4 . 8/7/2002
i its fairy gurl well...let me just say you have interesting conversations with your...the doll and so called musse
| PrincessFlorea chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
I can't put up any more right now. Like I said, I'm right here, and the story is halfway around the world. I didn't memorize it, either...
| akari chapter 2 . 8/7/2002
would you finish the story? please?
| akaruy chapter 2 . 8/3/2002
hey! i really like that... write MORE! SOON!
| NoirRouge chapter 2 . 7/26/2002
clever angels i like.
12 year old angels being pervertede to who.
blond hair has to be kurapika.
wright more when you get back.
a tiny kurapika! not fair i want a tiny leorio...
well any way wright more please!
| catbag chapter 2 . 7/24/2002
Please continue. PLEASE! Why did you have to end there? (T.T)
| Miyuki1 chapter 1 . 7/23/2002
Wow...nice FF... continue, k? Ja ne!
| Miyuki1 chapter 2 . 7/23/2002
Onegai, don't make this a Kurapikaxgirl... or Kurapikagirl...