Reviews for Thoughts At The Attic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nice piece...keep it up.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwww... that's realy good! I don't have any words for it, it was just...perfect... lots of xxx from steph writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I"m glad I read the whole thing. This was a very poweful chapter. You did very well. You should be very proud. You really had some great lines in there. I love this one about Zarbon's tone calling throught the door: "Like he was going to take a child on a trip to a zoo, and afterwards to destruction." You don't need to explain your ending. It was perfectly believable. For some of us, the past is as close as closing our eyes, and just as real... ~Angel |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK WOW. thats all i have to say. actually, maybe a little more. i've read tons of stories about vegeta's past, but never one like this about him exploring it through objects. and not only that, i love how he looked through bulma's album and got to see and understand how she grew up. even looking through the mariage album was interesting because he knows nothing about these things. many people try to unravel the mystery that is vegeta but they make it too boring and repetative. not you tho, good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, that was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your fic's AWESOME! It's the first I've read along these lines, and I'd have to say I enjoyed it. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is wonderful. Having Vegeta relive some of his worst memories is great...some good ones being tossed in would've been nice too, but...oh well...I like this. It's good. You've got talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was pretty cool. I got all shaky while reading this, maybe because of hunger, but the story contributed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought that it was an amazing ending and that you did a great job, really intense stuff in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU EVIL PERSON! HOW DARE YOU TORTURE VEGETA! No, I'm just kidding. This was really really good! I couldn't stop reading! |
![]() ![]() cute! write more, k? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is good. Can't wait to see what Vegeta finds next...it should be verrrrry interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe, very kool, i like it, another good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering how she got a hold of a picture of him smiling too. I think in the entire series I have only seen him smile once, but even that wasn't really a smile but more of a smirk. Keep up the good work and let Veggie find more things up there. I thought the purple one would be of Trunks you know purple hair purple album. but I guess I was wrong. heheh continue please _ |