|Reviews for Finding Home|
| Guest chapter 33 . 1/22/2013
This is fantastic. I was never one to read long fics, only one-shots, but this is definitely the exception. I love it. I'm just wondering if we'll be seeing anymore Henry/Grace stuff if you're making this Mad Swan. Because it'd sort of be a bit weird for them if their parents are together...
| numbah435spiritsong chapter 33 . 1/12/2013
Ooohh, the suspense builds. I wonder how everyone is going to react to Belle going to Wonderland... and how is she going to help? I'm not sure.. Anyways this was a good chapter :). I wonder how everything turns out with Belle's arrival in Wonderland.
| kira.prewett chapter 32 . 1/7/2013
I like it. Go for it.
| numbah435spiritsong chapter 32 . 1/5/2013
Lovely chapter! Finally, the sphinx is dead (Sort of reminds me of Percy Jackson and the Olympians, in the labyrinth where Percy and Annabeth face a sphinx xD). And Grace is in a bit of a situation with the Knave (my first instinct would not to trust him).
And I think Belle going in Wonderland would be a good idea, I'd like to see how that turns out.
| A chapter 31 . 12/31/2012
Please write more! I can't stand Jefferson and grace not being t
| nochance chapter 31 . 12/18/2012
Where is this going?
| numbah435spiritsong chapter 31 . 12/15/2012
Dun dun dun! The Knave of Hearts appears! What will this mean for Grace? We finally get more action with the Sphinx on the loose :) Geat chapter!
| bilboswaggins2 chapter 30 . 12/13/2012
Such a wonderful story. I can't believe they kissed :)
| kira.prewett chapter 30 . 12/12/2012
Still loving the story. It's weird but Emma and the Hatter kind of work. Never would thought of them as a couple but it works. Sweet. Can't wait to read more! Please keep writing!
| numbah435spiritsong chapter 30 . 12/12/2012
Lovely chapter! Grace is slowly but surely on her way to defeat the Queen.. and there's some Mad Swan thrown into the mix :3 I liked it!
| kira.prewett chapter 29 . 12/11/2012
wait to read more!
| nochance chapter 29 . 12/9/2012
Jefferson needs to stop running out on Emma.
| WolfieRed23 chapter 29 . 12/6/2012
Sorry I didn't review last time though I swear I did. This story is perfect and you're so creative please update!
| PrettyInPink85 chapter 29 . 12/6/2012
Okay, all your chapters are great! I love this story! I think maybe you should have Grace get caught by the Queen, but Grace says that she knows Regina, or something like that. Just a suggestion
| numbah435spiritsong chapter 29 . 12/5/2012
I suppose this review is a sort of review for the whole story so far, so pretend this review makes up for the previous twenty eight chapters that I didn't discover until about a week ago.
I really like the development of the story so far, and your idea of how Grace is the savior of Wonderland, seeing as there is no actual Alice in the Once Upon a Time series so far. Can't wait to see what happens, especially now that we know that the Queen of Hearts is definitely Cora. I found the fact that Cora, of all people, became the Queen of Hearts, somewhat ironic. But back to your story.
In some previous chapters, I think at the part where the curse is broken, I found it a bit choppy. It seemed so sudden that Henry ate the poisoned apple, especially since you said that the start of the story was at the time when Emma came to Storybrooke. There wasn't much of a buildup to that event, and there was barely any reference to any of the previous episodes. But maybe that was because you put your own twist in the story apart from the series, with the whole Emma/Jefferson bit in it and Paige/Grace's accident and the court case. If that's the case, then that's okay with me. I just found that part so sudden.
Oh, and I loved the Grace/Henry bit in this. I think they look absolutely adorable together :)
And for grammatical/spelling errors, there weren't many. Little to none, if I can remember correctly. Good job :) (to you, if it's un-beta'ed, and to your beta, if you have one). Many stories these days on FF have so many grammatical and spelling errors, and it just makes me mad. They're sort of hard to read too, and takes away the beauty of the story.
Anyways, I'm done with my little review rant, if that even qualifies as a rant :). Grace is one of my favorite characters, though she didn't make much of an appearance in the show. Great job with her character buildup. I really like it :).
Can't wait to read more from you! I like the direction this is heading :).