|Reviews for Let's dance|
| Ziggy chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Great,may want to check on the sentences ;gwen talking about the soap incident.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
The story was great like all the other ones.
I think you should change the end differently from your other stories.
| GRAMMARNAZI chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
You have many gramatical mistakes. But...Nice story! WONDERFUL! I like all of your stories. However, I wish you would not say yeah at the end of every story. It just ends the goodness of the story, so i would like if you could delete the yeah's. But, otherwise, EXCELLENT!
| Josh Spicer chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
It wasn't...bad...itvwas definitely flawed. You relied on cliches, both in the literary and Bwen world. Grammatical mistakes are everywhere as well.
The concept is good, but the execution is...basic.
| gerbilemonkeydog chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Whoa, this story was so touching! You really put your heart into this and give it your all. i can tell that you''re very passionate about what you do! Although, I must admit, to my chagrin, that there are multiple spelling/grammar errors and that most of your stories end off in a similar fashion. Perhaps find a Beta reader? '
But all in all, fantastic job :) Really liked this!
| Priscila chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
It is very beautiful. I can not explain what I felt while I was reading. I think I felt exactly what Ben and Gwen were feeling. was so beautiful. Thanks to make this
| The Cretin chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Well...this was nice. Cute too. (shivers) SEE THE WORDS THAT YOU INSPIRE! D8) XD LOL, this was a pretty nice oneshot. A nice little "What If" if you will. I see that love for happy endings never ends eh? ;) Keep rockin, doc boy