Reviews for Let's dance
Ziggy chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
Great,may want to check on the sentences ;gwen talking about the soap incident.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
The story was great like all the other ones.
I think you should change the end differently from your other stories.
GRAMMARNAZI chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
You have many gramatical mistakes. But...Nice story! WONDERFUL! I like all of your stories. However, I wish you would not say yeah at the end of every story. It just ends the goodness of the story, so i would like if you could delete the yeah's. But, otherwise, EXCELLENT!
Josh Spicer chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
It wasn't...bad...itvwas definitely flawed. You relied on cliches, both in the literary and Bwen world. Grammatical mistakes are everywhere as well.

The concept is good, but the execution is...basic.
gerbilemonkeydog chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Whoa, this story was so touching! You really put your heart into this and give it your all. i can tell that you''re very passionate about what you do! Although, I must admit, to my chagrin, that there are multiple spelling/grammar errors and that most of your stories end off in a similar fashion. Perhaps find a Beta reader? '
But all in all, fantastic job :) Really liked this!
Priscila chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
It is very beautiful. I can not explain what I felt while I was reading. I think I felt exactly what Ben and Gwen were feeling. was so beautiful. Thanks to make this
The Cretin chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Well...this was nice. Cute too. (shivers) SEE THE WORDS THAT YOU INSPIRE! D8) XD LOL, this was a pretty nice oneshot. A nice little "What If" if you will. I see that love for happy endings never ends eh? ;) Keep rockin, doc boy