|Reviews for GG|
| Whitefire chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
More constructive critisism.
You misspelled Rainbow Dash (RanbowDash) , beat (beet), supposed (exposed), Sonic Rainboom (SonicRainBoom), and that's it. Also check my other comment on other things you should work on.
And no one can instantly do the Sonic Rainboom.
And when Rainbow dash stuttered' it should have been: "B-but...I WAS SUPPOSED TO WIN!"
NO HARD FEELINGS, 'KAY?
| Vivid aesthetic chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
BLACKSPOT YOU NEED TO CHANGE THIS TO A MLP FANFIC GO TO CARTOONS AND LOOK FOR IT THEN CLICK IT AND YOUVE CHANGED IT DO IT NOW I HEART CAPITALS BIEZ DUDE! Oh yesh, im going to do my first youtube vid with redfall tomorrow, called retarded dancing. Ill tell you when its online. Kk, biez again!