|Reviews for Mt Silver|
| Kimnd chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
This is a really interesting concept, and one that I rarely see! It's a real shame that this is written, because a Pokemon battle is really built to be a visual experience. If you have any kind of artistic talent, I impolore you to draw this! I am pretty good at seeing it, but only because I'm naturally good at it, and because I've practiced seeing Pokemon battles in my head.
As for your actual story, it really is good, with just a few things you could improve on. I think the main thing is that you go through every thing so quickly. Drawing it out would help the pacing a lot. I mean, everything Gold's ever done has lead up to this moment. But it's over practically before it began! This has more of the pacing of a visual medium, like I said more. I still like it quite a bit! Congrats on your first submission. I'm thinking of writing something myself.
| Redguy221 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Well, that was easy! :))
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
wait, so in HG and SS he has a lapras instead of an espeon?
| LikenixOtyne chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
Wow that was cool, good job