Reviews for What Should Have Been
Jeno9466 chapter 13 . 8/12
Loved the story and really hope you're able to finish it. I have read a lot of soul bond docs and yours is easily one of my favorites. Best of luck with any and all future writing endeavors
FandomsSlay chapter 11 . 7/31
It was Nymphadora Tonks..right?
FandomsSlay chapter 8 . 7/31
"That's part of what we came here to talk about today. I know this is going to be terribly embarrassing for you, but really there is no way around it. Harry did your aunt and uncle ever have 'the talk' with you?"

Harry shook his head quietly. Dan quickly explained the 'birds and the bees', and when he finally finished Harry more closely resembled a cherry than an eleven year old boy
Possibly the third most embarrising I have like ever read
FandomsSlay chapter 6 . 7/31
Why cam't Harry have top in DADA! That's his forte!
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3
and hope you continue this story because I loved it
Guest chapter 7 . 5/27
No, your soul bond story is exactly like everyone's elses. They share thoughts, and they can't separated just like all the other soul bond stories. What is it that you think makes your story different? I sure didn't see anything. Well, yes did. Hermione yells at everyone she comes in contact with.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/27
Why doesn't Harry think that he can afford glasses if he can afford a necklace for Hermione's birthday? And, why did she accept the gift knowing he can't see. She's a real selfish girlfriend if you ask me. Harry would be better off with someone who actually cares that he can't see.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/27
Hermione's a bit of a stalker watching Harry's every move. She's worse than Ginny. Why would Harry like her? She's jumping his business like it's hers. She's not very likable. Is that your intent? Are you going to redeem her? Or is this your characterization of what love is?
Jestrbob chapter 13 . 5/24
Two years.

This is a good story, and feels like it is going somewhere good.

I would like to See it finished.
H Harmon chapter 13 . 5/9
This is a good story that I am enjoying immensely and would like to finish it, but I don’t think that is going to happen. I would like to point out, though, that you wrote, “Currently my focus is on my Fairy fic but WSHB isn’t abandoned.” That was two years ago? As I am a glutton for punishment, I am now going to start your fairy fic. Thank you.
midnightscar17 chapter 13 . 3/25
Update please
jjslll54 chapter 13 . 1/15

Just dropping a line that this is the second or third time I have read this story. Hope you decide to take up writing again in the future.

sfjoellen chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
I left a review for this story about a week ago. In that review I badly overreacted to a bit of this story and accused the author of some really rather terrible things.

I am not a lawyer, I've no idea what is legal to publish. For me to say this story is illegal was idiotic and wrong.

I think a Supreme Court Justice said: "I can't define porn but I know it when I see it." Clearly this story is not porn and my labeling it as such was wrong.

I apologize especially to the author, but to the community at large as well, for degrading the level of discourse, for not showing the respect deserved, for failing in restraint of pen and tongue.
sfjoellen chapter 10 . 10/25/2014
well.. i'm a big H/Hr fan. but they are 11 and 12. slow deep kisses, rubbing of 'areas' while asleep.. dude it's kiddie porn, sorry if that hurts your feelings but that's underage sexual activity and it's wrong and it's illegal. please edit it out.
lordblink chapter 13 . 10/9/2014
An extremely well written story. Unfortunately, there haven't been any updates in over a year. Looking forward to seeing some new developments on the story hopefully someday soon. Keep up the great work!
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