Reviews for Harry Potter and the Gift of Memories
Yourmumslover chapter 6 . 9/10
I feel like this is gonna be filled with people being fine with pedos
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 30 . 7/26
Oof, way to show you really are just a brain dead monkey. Too stupid to finish this, so you split it into other stories, that you were again too brain dead to finish. Hope everyone in your life lets you know how much on an idiot you are.
alsdjhfgljkwebgh chapter 4 . 7/26
Are you brain dead? 31 million pounds is not anywhere close enough to be able to run a small country. I can't imagine how hard life must be for someone as brain dead and moronic as you are.
Jimbocous chapter 29 . 7/7
Thanks for a great (re)read. Very nicely done.
maiqsmail chapter 22 . 6/8
This fanfic is very bloated. There are many details that serve no purpose. Why would we need to know who sat where and wore what if the scenes ends right after? Such details should be cut down to Chehov's gun. Also, Harry in the scene with Dudley is a bad mannered brat. There was no need to provoke him into confrontation. And I feel like that was specifically to impress his female friend. It's not the first time Harry shows off in from of a female for no other purpose than showing off. Before sorting feast, same with him going all martial when they were surprised by ghosts.
maiqsmail chapter 18 . 6/7
"This story, Harry Potter and the Gift of Memories, only covers Harry's first year at Hogwarts. You can liken this story to Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone. Like the original story written by JK Rowling, this story WILL end when the first year is over, and I will begin a new story in another fic as a sequel." - I would really appreciate that warning in the beginning to know what I was getting into.
maiqsmail chapter 15 . 6/7
This is Ch15 out of 30. While I was alright with slow pacing during pre-Hogwarts time as this was a necessity for a world building, why is it still so slow paced after the sorting ceremony? It's one chapter per every small occasion, every notable lesson and so on. More importantly, why is it marked as complete? We are half way in the fanfic and Harry is not even at the Xmas of his first year.
maiqsmail chapter 10 . 6/6
Not just Mary Sue, but literally confirmed second coming of Merlin...
maiqsmail chapter 8 . 6/6
Nice start. I appreciate how much Harry resembles Tom Riddle in his upbringing. My only gripe is that I came here for Harry-with-perfect-memory, not yet another Mary Sue excelling in everything and anything. Also, it's cool how he started too include useful footnotes about something that he already read about, in this case meaning of runes. I always love when fanfics include intricate details like that.
maiqsmail chapter 3 . 6/6
Whatever the hell do you mean "harem"? It isn't said anywhere before the end of Ch3, not summary, not previous a/n, not tags? What is this?
Guest chapter 17 . 5/28
tHis CHapTeR tUrNed OuT wElL. Shut the fuck up bitch. Half way through and what do we have? That’s right ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOTHING. This has story started out great with the first chapter, then proceeded to establish itself as the most boring fucking thing I’ve ever had the unfortunate pleasure of setting my eyes on. You’re taking multiple chapters to basically finish a conversation. I’ve seen actual retards write better shit. Hell, a crack fic has better plot pacing.
Lederra chapter 1 . 4/16
Surrey is not a city it is a county.
bigbadpeter91 chapter 30 . 4/9
i enjoyed this story cant wait to read the second part
thatcher577 chapter 29 . 4/3
I thank you for the chapter.
thatcher577 chapter 28 . 4/3
I thank you for the chapter.
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