| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Gift of Memories |
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   Pat9921 chapter 1 . 6/8 why would a 10 or 11 year old workout like that, that doesn't make any sense?! whattttt muscles at age 11 fuck youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu |
| gigamans57 chapter 29 . 5/31 'Dying at 11 was not conducive to his goals' you don't fucking say. |
| gigamans57 chapter 23 . 5/31 'Poster of Viktor Krum' he is 14 here and I'm almost certain not at all famous at this point. |
| gigamans57 chapter 22 . 5/31 bringing stupid fucking anime cliches into a story like this is lame as hell. He's somehow smart in literally every field but attraction. It's not even 'people' as a whole as he's good at making friends and helping other people with their issues, it's literally just this retarded anime harem trope of not understanding what it means when a girl blushes after you kiss her. It's just the cherry on top of this trope-fest that would be so good without the rampant cliches. |
| gigamans57 chapter 14 . 5/30 'Salutations' seriously? |
| gigamans57 chapter 12 . 5/30 Oh of fucking COURSE he's already somehow experimented and improved on a potion at home, alongside everything fucking else. A great story idea made almost insufferable by how having a perfect memory somehow makes Harry perfect. |
| gigamans57 chapter 10 . 5/30 SO much cheesy shit, oh my god. |
| Lord Chronus chapter 29 . 5/28 Well written, and any flaws that JKR might have had in writing HP were eradicated in this Fanfic. I enjoyed this story, and until I read your AN about this being longer then OOTP, I didn't even realize, as I was engrossed in this novel. Hats off, and I'm on to book 2! |
| Lord Chronus chapter 15 . 5/27 Why'd you torture Harry with McLaggen? Dude's gonna remember everything. I'd see if Harry could go to a healer and be mind-wiped of the git. Otherwise, wow, nice writing, and I enjoyed the Quidditch scene. |
| Lord Chronus chapter 10 . 5/27 Even if the hat stalling is a tad bit cliche, I very much enjoyed this portrayal of the hat stall. Interesting, and having multiple points of view on the hat stall helped give it some uniqueness. |
| Just William chapter 19 . 5/6 Another good chapter but there are a couple of typo's "I heard he through", should be "I heard he threw" and it's "McLaggen", not McGlaggen". |
| Just William chapter 18 . 5/6 A couple of typo's, "Trasnfiguration", should be "Transfiguration" AND "several isles of books cases" should be "several aisles of book cases". |
| Just William chapter 17 . 5/6 Another good chapter. A minor typo, it's a Calming draught not a Calming drought |
| Just William chapter 15 . 5/6 Another good chapter and it's McLaggen not Mglaggen - numerous times in this chapter.. |
| Just William chapter 13 . 5/6 A good chapter with a minor typo, "appearin lost", should be "appearing lost". |