|Reviews for Fifty Shades Brighter|
| Debby10 chapter 22 . 1/19
are you still writing this story, updates?
| GSue chapter 22 . 11/26/2013
Just read your story and hope that you will continue. It is well written and shows thought about their relationship. Ana will need to be strong for him and he will need to accept her strength. You are doing so well. Keep writing.
| Cascagrossa chapter 22 . 11/8/2013
Love your take on the story - please update soon I am eagerly waiting the next chapter!
| Eleana12 chapter 22 . 10/27/2013
I keep checking this story hoping to find an update. Any chance
you will complete it? Jean
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/16/2013
Wow! Very impressed with your writing and story. This is better than the original! Please continue as I have enjoyed this story very much! You are a great writer!
| jeangb chapter 22 . 9/11/2013
Well, I've come to the end of your there more to come? I hope so because they both have a long way to go
I don't read FF to critisize other peoples efforts. I couldn't do any better. But I do like to read your take on this series of books. If I don't like what I'm reading I stop.I do this purely for fun. I will however, make a piont Where necessary in my opinion.
Goodluck in your new life in New York and in collage
| jeangb chapter 6 . 9/11/2013
I've just found this story and so I have a lot to read yet.I like the way you are giving us insight to Christians thoughts and feelings during these early days. ( I'm just going to chapter 7) Surely, We all feel the same at the begining of a relationship. Where is it going does He/she even like me, what have we got in common? Christian has never had to explore these feelings, so naturally they are very confusing, he has nothing to compare them to in his past. His talks with Flynn, hopefully, will make him realise that these feelings and insecurities are perfectly normal.
I will read on and probably comment again as the story unfolds. This is well written well done.
| kelmal chapter 22 . 8/30/2013
Another great chapter.
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/26/2013
Your story is very well written but I won't be following it I'm afraid. The original Ana was embarrassing to women sometimes but your Ana is much worse... As a previous reviewer states she is just number 16 now. I know what you are trying to do here I think but I think Ana needs a backbone if you want anyone to stay interested and respect her which is crucial when reading a story. Please take this as a constructive comment as your writing style is excellent and I'm annoyed that Ana bugged me so much I can't follow the story.
| Hi chapter 22 . 8/20/2013
I loved the line from Kate "I thought I heard a helicopter" hahaha. I had tears in my eyes. I really liked the way Kate looked out for Ana here. Great update!
| rosie.shishi chapter 22 . 8/19/2013
Love this story really good :) can't wait for more xoxo
| Tmacone chapter 22 . 8/18/2013
Just found your story, & I like your take on it. Good luck with school & please update when you can.
| grantcreek chapter 22 . 8/18/2013
Good luck on this new chapter of your life. I hope you find time to continue writing because this is a great story. This chapter gives you a lot to build on for future conflicts for them to work through. As in the original fifty shades I think your version of the characters will have to deal with Ana wanting "more" and Christian slowly realizing he does as well.
| Hermione chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
getting really boring. same story ...
| nedbella chapter 22 . 8/18/2013
Great chapter. Geeez Kate's got a bug up her butt when it comes to Christian hasn't she...LOL. A nice little introduction to their BDSM relationship. Ana will slowly learn to hold her tongue after this quick session... I wonder if Christian will soften to her more eventually and will want a vanilla relationship. On a more personal note, good luck with your move. Hope it goes well. Can't wait for more. I always look forward to a new update of this story. I love it.