Reviews for Fifty Shades Brighter
VRB Mariposa chapter 27 . 9/4/2014
That was an excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what he and Flynn discover. Thanks for the updated chapter and the entertainment. :-D
Guest chapter 27 . 8/28/2014
Loving it. Please update soon. Hope evil bitch Elena gets what is coming to her soon.
Guest chapter 22 . 8/24/2014
Why is Ana so whiny and clingy, so stupid and whats up with the weird sex talk, come on; who says those stupid lines during sex, you really need to come with some better lines.
guest chapter 17 . 8/24/2014
Oh no! you make Christian so pathetically weak. Unless you're forgetting, he is a DOM and he does not take shit from anyone, not even Elena. Fix your shit of a story.
sofia chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
i like coz i got to know the story from christian's point of view
hauntedone chapter 27 . 8/19/2014
I am loving thus story.I love the way you get into Christian's head. You write well beyond your years. Do not change the way you write your sex scenes, they are very descriptive in their own way. Sometimes less is more. Great job!
Guest chapter 27 . 8/18/2014
Just caught up. I love it
motherbeatrice chapter 27 . 8/18/2014
you're doing such a good job, this can't be easy at all...take all the time you need...
motherbeatrice chapter 22 . 8/18/2014
hope you are doing well in school...I'm enjoying this a lot...
motherbeatrice chapter 21 . 8/18/2014
love it...what a twist, now we get to hear from his perspective...awesome...
motherbeatrice chapter 20 . 8/18/2014
no, its fine, if we don't have a good imagination by now after reading all these ff stories, well, then too bad...
I liked this version of her first time...
motherbeatrice chapter 19 . 8/18/2014
good for you, you should stick to your own agenda and do what feels right...anyhow, its amazing...
motherbeatrice chapter 18 . 8/18/2014
this is so interesting, I love the twist on the story...
motherbeatrice chapter 17 . 8/18/2014
loved it!
motherbeatrice chapter 16 . 8/18/2014
oh no, why is he going back to her...ugh...she's the wrong person to go see, he should have talked more to Flynn...
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