Elita's Karen attitude in this chapter still bugs me, lol.

I love this fic. It was one of the first I read and it cemented my love of Tranformers going forwards. I recently was going through some of my old stuff and was led down a rabbit hole of memories that took me to reading with my older sister watching over my shoulder as I reacted to the twists and turns of the narrative. This story was a major bonding moment between us as I accepted this new fandom of hers and allowed myself to be brought in as well. I have yet to regret that decision. The joy this story brings me cannot be measured.

(I just realized the previous review was posted on the wrong chapter so I’m just gonna post it here-)
It ended with a cliffhanger! Nuuuuuuuu!
I love the mix (and wild rollercoaster) of action and drama this masterpiece has and even though I am saddened it no longer updates, I’m glad that I was able to discover this hidden gem and read it all the way til here. Thank you for the commitment and time you have devoted into writing this masterpiece and I hope you are having the time of your life with your family (yay!)!

I feel so relieved when Prowl and Blue’s relationship got mended. Love the chapter :D

I recognized Bluestreak's uh... dispute? feel of betrayal? as inevitable and yet it still manages to make my heart go 'oof'. I love it though :D

ayyy Prowl's bonding with Magnus! :))

ngl, I was not expecting Mirage to appear x) (but I like his inclusion in this story!) The mental image I've depicted of those younglings on Prowl's back is just heartwarming and adorable!

I was on the edge of my seat to see the Prime's reaction -as well as Prowl's response- and it was amazingly well done! The delivery of reasoning and advice to each other were nicely done

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This chapter was so wholesome I couldn't stop smiling! I especially love the scene where Prowl is training the medics. Such a sweet chapter 33

Oh my goodness, this story...

I found this perusing somewhere, I'm not even sure where it showed up. And, of course, I started to read... and then I couldn't stop. No matter how hard I tried, over a span of several days, I could simply not stop reading this fic. About halfway through my reading, a friend who I had shared my enthusiasm for this story with asked if it was complete, and I realized with a start that it was not. However, putting aside that concern by reading the many positive comments, I allowed myself to become reimmersed in this amazing, deeply thought out story.

Now I have come to the final published chapter. Dear author, I thank you for the amazing content you created that I have been blessed to consume over these past few days. While I wish there was some chance for this story to come to a true ending, I do not regret spending the time it took to read this. I absolutely loved every minute of it. May God bless you with whatever path your life has taken to lead you away from this story, and thank you again for your wonderful creation!

okay okay rereading I know... but... Soundwave... he experimented on prowl? was he trying to split his emotional and logical centers in order to better control him and prevent ethics from playing a roll? my gosh, that must be why he had to explain the issue to Bluestreak! Prowl has been through so much. I wonder if there's ever to be an episode where it looks back on that... He has such a terrifying history with the decepticons

This is one of numerous times I have read this story and, as always, it does not disappoint. The sheer amount of thought, effort, emotion, etcetera within this amazing story is astounding. Your portrayal of all the characters- especially Prowl- is inspiring. Thank you for an extrordinary read!

I just read this over the time span of three days XD

This is a super good fic, it's got great characterisation and a super interesting plot. I've really enjoyed watching Prowl form connections to those around him. It doesn't feel rushed or forced. I'll admit, I never really thought to read a Prowl fanfic before I found this, but I decided to give it a shot. Best. Decision. Ever. I'm so glad I read it!

I will never regret staying up until the early hours of the morning reading this masterpiece. Thank you for sharing! 3

This is one of the best fics I have ever read. I truly hope all is going well for you in life, and that whenever you decide (or are able) to pick up this story again, I will keep reading as long as you keep writing. :)