Reviews for Memories
Grey Wolf4 chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
This was a great one shot of Lazlo and Ted meeting again after so long. I mean you've portrayed their friendship quite well and they were definitely OLD friends that's for sure after a few hundred years.
Moonlight M3lody chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
I think you meant 'depressing' when you said 'desperate'. Anyway, this is a whole lot of foreshadowing. I especially like the end where Lazlo's forced to abandon his last surviving friend, and the whole spiel with Luc suggests there's a longer sequel coming around. I wonder how this affects Luc when he grows up in the wars.

Having Lazlo visit Leknaat every now and then explains why he is never around in any war. Leknaat probably warns him.

A couple of grammar and spelling issues like for example: threatening of Kooluk should be 'threat from Kooluk'.
he will understand what it mean later.-He'd understand what it meant later.
remained friend-remaining friend

Nothing too jarring, and you certainly can work on it.
F.4.7.3 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I still want you to appear in later suikoden! *cries*

and, i salute on you when i read on the last part, "…When will I meet my end?"
this really got me on the feeling... the greatest part in my opinion... XD

but, i thought Ted was a little ooc? O.o

write more! XD