Reviews for new worlds to get home
Edhla chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
This is a good idea for a story :) However I found it difficult to tell where the story ended and the author's notes began, and there were quite a lot of spelling, punctuation and grammar errors that made it difficult to read what you were trying to get across at times. A good beta might be able to help. Good luck x
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Cool story update soon