|Reviews for Third Time's a Charm|
| Excliptix47 chapter 6 . 1/23
This is a lovely story. Poor Claude. Its nice that at the end they are just cats that love each other
| Sheldon The Whale chapter 6 . 9/5/2014
:'3 That was the cutest/happiest Fanfiction I've read in a long time. Thank you for writing it!
| Arashe chapter 6 . 5/1/2014
I'm re-reading this for the third time and just like the first two times all I can think about is that I really would love to read a prequel to this. See how they got together and why Claude hates the Undertaker so much (there must be something more than just the fact he dated Sebastian)
I really love all of your stories, especially the Claude/Sebastian ones. I hope to see more of this pairing from you.
| Akatsuki Fatale chapter 6 . 2/7/2014
Hahaha omg I love this story! Poor Claude, but I just knew Sebastian would end up either asking him himself or cluing him in xD Y'know, cuz Sebastian's just one hell of a boyfriend and all that..
| Shadow Veli chapter 6 . 2/11/2013
I loved this!
It was well-written, cute, and just amazing!
| Migoto Nami chapter 6 . 12/19/2012
Lol you didn't ruin the surprise that this was the end chapter XD The 'complete' status of the story did lol XD But that's okay. I had a feeling it was coming soon anyways -w-
This was one of the cutest ending to a story that I have ever read -w- I loved the part with the book and the proposal and everything else in between! I like died from fluff overload XD
When Sebs locked himself up in the office, I felt kind of tense though. I kept thinking... Why is he hiding? Does he know? And the suspense just kept building up the more I kept reading and I thought that was really neat w Cuz I kept wondering, what is Sebastian doing in there? Eating Doritos? I don't know!...I wanna know! DX Also, when Claude called Sebs a 'lazy ass' I laughed XD When has he ever been lazy? XDDDD But I digress...
The book part was just genius. It was a great way to recollect all the chapters and it made sense cuz Bassy's a writer :D I liked being able to see the story from Sebastian's point of view, it gave a different perspective :] The way you made them cats was so adorable and I had to wonder, what was Lau thinking when he drew all those drawings for them? lol But I guess he probably didn't care. As long as he has his money, pipe and RanMao, what does he have to complain about right? XD
The actual proposal was so cute -w- But I wish Claude got down on one knee though :/ But eh, what are you gonna do? He was probably dying from nerves and I can't really judge cuz I've never been in this situation so I can't really blame him.
The ending was just so full of fluff and it really helped that you connected the dots for us about how Sebastian knew and when cuz I had a feeling it was Ciel but I still wasn't entirely sure. I just want to bop Ciel on the head btw, little brat :I But I guess in retrospect, if he hadn't done that then Claude would have had to try a few more times. Cuz he wouldn't have had Sebastian's helpful book at the end yep
I loved this little story :] It was so fluffy and cute -w- I'm sorry though that I didn't get these reviews to you until now, but you know, finals suck, what are you gonna do -.- So yea, loved it, like always :D Talk to you later, ja!
| Migoto Nami chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
This one, I gotta say, was my favorite. The atmosphere of the hayride sounded so beautiful and it was something quiet for the both of them to two together alone. -w- It was a cute idea and omg Tanaka is a genius for suggesting it :DDD
Speaking of which, it's kind of weird to see you write Tanaka in the way that he's supposed to be, you know, NOT trying to rape Sebs XD I really do love that old man. He is so wise and cute and old lol -w-
The triplets were a bit of bonus fun but I found it kind of weird to think that they would all be working together under the same person, doing the same thing in our realistic world 0.o...odd. But I enjoyed them regardless, and they actually talked XD That was the best part.
The poem that Sebastian said first while they were driving, that was really good *.* Did you come up with that, cuz I haven't heard that one before XD It sounded so pretty :] Also, while they're driving, I gotta wonder what's going through Sebastian's mind. I mean, Claude's been taking him out a lot recently to try and propose, and you gotta think that he knows that something's up XD
The two of them snuggling in the back of the cart was the sweetest thing ever *w* They're so full of love for each other :3 So sweet! X3 I'm a sucker for fluff, but I gotta ask. When Claude looked at their picnic foodstuffs...why did he find the cake so funny? 0.o Is it because the cake is small and for only two people? If so, then that's not very nice Claude. You shouldn't pick on things smaller than you XD
The thing with the owls... I found that to be very random o.o I can understand that owls can symbolize death and other things, and that since Claude's a "spider", he could be afraid of birds cuz they ear insects, but still, I just found that to be random. Lol, maybe I'm biased cuz I have an owl from build-a-bear workshop XD lol
But anyways, the comforting scene was cute and again, I really feel bad for Claude. He's gotta be feeling like complete dirt at this point :[ But he's gotta know that this is all worth it in the end though :] So that's good enough reason for him to try again yep yep :]
| Migoto Nami chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
Ah, try number four. I will be honest again, you actually didn't get me on this one. you almost fooled me with that proposal but I noticed that the story wasn't yet completed when this chap went up so I knew that it was destined to fail. Poor Claude **
I liked what you did with this proposal idea :] It was something that Sebastian could enjoy and it was something classy too. It would have been perfect if not for Claude's exhaustion. Poor guy, he keeps failing :[
That little proposal was so cute but I would have like it better if there was just a teensy bit more of a speech that Claude made when he asked. Like, ''Sebastian, I love you. Will you marry me?'' Or something like that, but other than that it was cute w I was squee-ing a little lol
The reference at the end to season two of the anime made me laugh and at the same time made me feel bad for him. Poor Claude :[ Sad pandas...
| Migoto Nami chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
'The Crusher and its evilness.'
You, my friend, have a way with words lol XD And you are so mean to Claude :[ Poor thing just wants to propose to his baby D: Btw, I know that Ciel did it. You can never trust Ciel in stories like this where he's not paired with Sebastian. He's always such a little brat :I
I was kind of surprised when you brought him in and made him Seb's brother, and the whole family situation too. It's not that uncommon for people to write Ciel and Bassy as family members but still, I didn't think it'd come up here XD But I gotta say that I did kind of miss Ciel when reading your ClaudexSeb fics, if only a little so it was nice to see him for a little bit :] Even if he is a brat :I
Btw, I liked that Sebs was making Ciel a cake lol XD Even if this alternate universe, he's still that kid's slave lol XD The little yaoi part in the kitchen was very cute and smexy and I bet poor Claude got a headache after that hit with the spoon :oo Ouch.
When Claude couldn't find the ring and trashed their room pulling out clothes and such I felt bad for him :[ But then when Sebastian came in and asked ''Did the dresser offend you?''...I laughed so much. That is like the funniest thing someone can say when walking into that situation XD Lol!
And omg like why does Claude have this thing with inanimate objects in this story? XDDD It's so funny! Lol, yea Claude you kick that dresser! Show it who's boss! Lmao! At the end, when you called the dresser, ''The Crusher. As in the crusher of dreams,'' I completely died laughing. I know I should feel bad for Claude but oh my goodness that was just too funny XDDD
I think Claude is developing some level of insanity or something with those inanimate objects. All the failure must be going to his head :[ Poor thing : But it's just too funny to read so I'm not all that concerned XD I know he gets it right in the end, lol XDDD
| YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 6 . 12/13/2012
Well I must say, you sure did put Claude through hell. It was extremely funny to read, though at one point I wanted to wack him in the head and tell him to stop trying so hard, but Tanaka beat me to it, (though I still think he needed a good wack on the head!) all that Freud and we didn't get a hint of surprise from Sebastian: Maddening! Nice one.
| ClosetGoth chapter 6 . 12/12/2012
Ah! I've been such a fail fan, not reviewing . Sorry! I read this on Sunday but have just now had time to review.
I LOVED this story! It's so sweet and funny! So light-hearted, definitely different from 'AaR' XP -Squees and flails- That little story Sebby wrote was so adorable! I think I overdosed on the sweet fluffiness! So cute. So cute. SO CUTE! Loved it.
And I had a really really bad day at work after I read this, so the memory of the adorable fluff got me through the drama and stress. Thank you for that! -Hearts- Your fics are simply the best! Thank you for writing such great stories and sharing them with everyone!
-Here's some brownies and cookies!- Have a good day!
| DevoraDeath chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
lol! luv the ending
| SometimesILie chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
I am sad to this story end. But at the same time I am glad Claude finally was able to propose. Thank you for this story!
| Through Darkness and Light chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
That was adorable!
| Odji chapter 6 . 12/9/2012
That was such a sweet ending, and left me smiling! What a cute fic :)