Reviews for Sister, Sister
robin.wurster.92 chapter 9 . 5/11
can you add Deimata possessing Skylar's soul in chapter 10
allison chapter 9 . 3/30
please update
Lovestrike01 chapter 9 . 2/5
please finiish!-
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
what is taking so long with you huh listen dude iv',e aready finshed writing two of my novels in a month and I am currently working on the thrid one. Which is already at page 105. It's time for you to update another chapter otherwise you're just wasting your talant by keeping us all waiting. I have a question for you and the answer will either depend on you writing chapter 10 or banning the story altogether. Do you even want to be an author. Because look I'm only eighteen years old and I found out a year ago at the age of seventeen that I wanted to be a author. Honestly a good author takes maybe three or four months to continue a chapter. Not three yeas. I'll give you untill New years day. I'm not trying to be mean and all but i'd consider this if I were you. A person was writing a story callcalled her out for not contiuing a chapter just like I'm doing to you right now and do you wanna know what happened she quit. If you know the author please tell whoever it is that I'm sorry but I spoke nothing but the truth.
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Guest chapter 9 . 11/5/2014
You shouldn't continue writing if you're just going to leave the rest of us waiting. Also the deimata finally possesing skylar's soul review? i think you should have included that in chapter nine because it sounded to me that you were doing a whole other freaking story. But yeah sorry but this story has also been around for like almost two or three years it is time for you to finish it.
Erudessa-gabrielle chapter 9 . 9/29/2014
MORE!
LordStarscream22 chapter 9 . 9/26/2014
write Skylar's spirit thingy. it's about Skylar getting captured and taken to an underground cavern and getting chained to a giant stone and having a mechanical arm getting activated and putting a white light on Skylar's face and having the arm enter her body and having the pull Skylar's soul out of her body and having white lights come out of Skylar's body as the arm extracts her soul from her body and having Skylar's lifeless head go down and having the arm take Skylar's protoplasm to a protoplasm vat and messing up Skylar's hair and putting Skylar's protoplasm in the protoplasm vat and having Deimata fly towards Skylar's lifeless body and having Deimata put Skylar's lifeless head up and putting her fingers on the sides of her head and having Deimata smile and laugh at Skylar's lifeless body knowing that she was finally going to possess Skylar's soul for all eternity as she opens her mouth and puts her finger on her chin and having Skylar's lifeless body move up and having Deimata look confuse as her right arm enters Skylar’s mouth and having Deimata growl at Skylar as she enters Skylar's body to turn her into a zombie and having Skylar's zombie Deimata soul enter her body and having Skylar's skin turn red and having Skylar's hands move as Deimata's torso enter Skylar's mouth and having Skylar's eyes turn red and turning into Zombie Deimata Skylar
Guest chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
write Skylar's spirit thingy. it's about Skylar getting captured and taken to an underground cavern and getting chained to a giant stone and having a mechanical arm getting activated and putting a white light on Skylar's face and having the arm enter her body and having the pull Skylar's soul out of her body and having white lights come out of Skylar's body as the arm extracts her soul from her body and having Skylar's lifeless head go down and having the arm take Skylar's protoplasm to a protoplasm vat and messing up Skylar's hair and putting Skylar's protoplasm in the protoplasm vat and having Deimata fly towards Skylar's lifeless body and having Deimata put Skylar's lifeless head up and putting her fingers on the sides of her head and having Deimata smile and laugh at Skylar's lifeless body that she was finally going to possess Skylar's soul for all eternity as she opens her mouth and puts her finger on her chin and having Skylar's lifeless body move up and having Deimata look confuse as her right arm enters Skylar’s mouth and having Deimata growl at Skylar as she enters Skylar's body to turn her into a zombie and having Skylar's zombie Deimata soul enter her body and having Skylar's skin turn red and having Skylar's hands move as Deimata's torso enter Skylar's mouth and having Skylar's eyes turn red and turning into Zombie Deimata Skylar
LordStarscream22 chapter 8 . 9/25/2014
write Skylar's spirit thingy. it's about Skylar getting captured and taken to an underground cavern and getting chained to a giant stone and having a mechanical arm getting activated and putting a white light on Skylar's face and having the arm enter her body and having the pull Skylar's soul out of her body and having white lights come out of Skylar's body as the arm extracts her soul from her body and having Skylar's lifeless head go down and having the arm take Skylar's protoplasm to a protoplasm vat and messing up Skylar's hair and putting Skylar's protoplasm in the protoplasm vat and having Deimata fly towards Skylar's lifeless body and having put Skylar's lifeless head up and putting her fingers on the sides of her head and having Deimata smile and laugh at Skylar's lifeless body that she was finally going to possess Skylar's soul for all eternity as she opens her mouth and puts her finger on her chin and having Skylar's lifeless body move up and having Deimata look confuse as her right arm enters Skylar’s mouth and having Deimata growl at Skylar as she enters Skylar's body to turn her into a zombie and having Skylar's zombie Deimata soul enter her body and having Skylar's skin turn red and having Skylar's hands move as Deimata's torso enter Skylar's mouth and having Skylar's eyes turn red and turning into Zombie Deimata Skylar
Baylee chapter 9 . 4/19/2014
PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! I really like this story so far and will he really disappointed if it doesn't continue :)
rainbow5 chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
Common please update i want to see what she is afraid of i really like this story.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/8/2014
Update please
Hazza1997 chapter 9 . 1/4/2014
Loving it ! Bring on the updates
The-Originals-Rock chapter 9 . 12/2/2013
Why haven't you updated!
I want to see what Rylee's fear is!
Guest chapter 9 . 11/1/2013
Please continue! I love it
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