|Reviews for Heating ducts can and can't be good hideing places|
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 2/15
ROTFL. Awesome. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
| TolkienGeek1 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Wow. Okay, this could've been really good. You REALLY need to work on your grammar. And when people are talking it goes like this, "Hey Sam, what's up?" Spike said. Otherwise people can't tell that your characters are talking. And there are differences between your and you're. And we're and where are completely different. You also left out a few words here and there and it made it confusing. Just fix this up and it'll be good!
| DaughterofthemostHigh chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
I still like this story btw I was formerly reviewing as Samaholic
| samaholic chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
this as usuall had me swollowing laughter all the way through!
| Samaholic chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
ROFLOL! you should write a story about april fools day!
| Buckeye chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
| Sewtunes chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
The story was funny-great idea-and could have been quite good except for the lack of punctuation marks and quotation marks to indicate what is being said by whom as well as a few incomplete sentences.
| Stephanie-BB-JISBON-CASKETT chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
The idea was nice, but I stopped reading when Spike first spoke, you didn't use any "" so it was difficult to read what was actually said and wasn't.
So that would make this, for instance:
"Hey Sam" Spike greeted him. "Looks like we're the only ones they're still waiting for." Spike said stripping out of his street clothes and into his uniform.
"Yah better get going." Sam said, quietly getting up and walking away.
It would really be much easier to read.
| dawnpritchard66 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Nice chapter ,poor Sam x