Omg were Naruto and Sasuke trying to hook Kiba and Itachi up? LOL

Poor Naruto, he has gone through so much

It's great! 3

Wow. This story was nothing short of amazing. From start to finish I was totally captivated and could barely think about anything else. I don't even have the words to describe how much I enjoyed it.

The way you portrayed each of the characters was so interesting and yet not too out of character. Having Naruto and Sasuke fall in the love like that was pretty cool too. I genuinely could not predict what was going to happen in this story. Why did Sasuke wait the entire summer though? And maybe I'm dumb but I still couldn't figure out the significance of the story's title; I'm guessing it is a play on Simon Says, but didn't get much more than that.

I actually really liked Kiba in this story when I generally don't, so that was new! Itachi and Naruto are tied for my favourite character (although Sasuke is second), but even I was pissed off Naruto didn't get at least a little retribution against Itachi, and I'm not entirely sure what to think of Itachi and Kiba. I mean Itachi is seriously messed up; the stuff he tried to do to Naruto! I would have liked to have seen a bit more interaction between them at the end.

Thank you ever so much for the beautiful read. I read your Pyromaniac a while back, so I'm surprised I didn't find this story sooner. I'm curious as to your Roommates stories... I might check those out.

Best wishes,
Naruto Meowzers

I usually wait till the end of a story to review, but this story is so freaking stressful I love it!

Ya know, I love me some Itachi, but in this story you can keep him. I don't want him! Anyways, this was one the best SasuNaru stories I ever read!

In the U.S. public schooling is free. Why couldn't Sasuke attend school and work? And how expensive is their rent that they'd barely make ends meet?

I figured that they are in the U.S., because you stated that Sasuke to run to the border and head to either Mexico or Canada.

Third time reader here, hello. OH MY GOD. FUCKING BRILLIANCE ALL AROUND. IM SO SAD YGAL SHUT DOWN BC THE SMUT IN THIS STORY IS JUST SO SENSUAL AND AMAZING AHHHH! I do not think I will ever get over this fanfic to be fucking real with you, man. First time I ever read this was when little fetu 11 year old me was browsing the sasunaru category on FF (back when they permitted sexual content), looking for something to satiate my hunger for dramatic passionate bl, and bitch did I find it. Five years later and two more read-throughs, I’m still in love-I’veread through Let it Snow the same amount heheh. Naruto developed so fucking well, and yeah, while things escalated very fast between him and Sasuke, you were still able to make it believable. That’s one of many reasons as to why I think your writing i r. Thank you so much for writing all of your beautiful stories, I hope to, one day, see the full versions on AFF or AO3 one of these days.

I love the SasuNaru and ItaKiba...you should make an ItaKiba sequel...3

(Just to let you know I've read this book a minimum of seven times and I can't stop re-reading it...i love this book so much! 3) Just to let you know during this entire book I listened to 'Lucid Dreams' by 'Juice WRLD' and 'SAD!' by 'XXXTENTACION' the lyrics from both songs go so well with this story and Sasuke and Narutos love for eachother...Thank you so much for writing this amazing story!

Read this story a couple years ago, and I love it!

I’m sorry Itachi. I kinda agree with Naruto there. It’s less risky to just to one drop off. The longer Naruto stays with them, the more potential for things going wrong. He could just deposit the money in an off shore account if he’s really that worried, like all the villains do in the movies. Also, if I were Minato, I’d hire people to get my son back, since he’s rich and all with connections. Stupid Minato.
And Naruto’s too nice, to apologize to Sasuke.
Still enjoying the fic. Will keep reading. Rare to “see” a pervy Itachi. (Evil grin)

Thoroughly enjoying this story and wondering if Minato's ever going to watch the video that he skipped. The one of Sasuke and Naruto that looks very non-consensual.

I just want to say, this is the best fanfiction story I have read. Only once have I ever cried this hard, the reason being how good and well built the story was. It was such a good story that I imagined a whole different house for it, and that’s how you know it was the best thing. I first saw this on Wattpad, and I was like, shit, I need to find the original on and comment this myself. Props to you, this is something I will cherish and keep rereading everyday.

I am not really the type to comment on stories. However, when I read some of the comments for this one, I had to. I don’t really understand what there is to not like about this story. The plot is amazing and so is the character developments. I like that you used mental issues such as troubles in family dynamics and trauma. As someone who works in a field of mental rehabilitation, it is hard to describe to others the importance of getting mental help (both the professional kind and just having others’ support). I also enjoyed the ending because it really sounds like something Sasuke’s character here would pull.
I actually read this story back when it was half way done (sorry I didn’t comment then, I really am more of a reader). This is story finished when I was a freshman in high school. I’m now in college, and since it finished, this is about my 4th time reading it. This story has been a favorite of mine for a long time and wish there was a sequel of sorts, that focused on Kiba and Itachi. I am totally interested in how that would play out. Please keep up the great work in writing, whether it’s here or just in your personal life. You’re a gift.