|Reviews for Animagus Mishap! SLOW UPDATES!|
| Rawrking chapter 1 . 4/21
Another shit story by this guy. No plot, no character development and lemons worse than cheap porno flicks. Harry seems fucking retarded with how he acts, there are no characters-only cardboard cutouts of people, there's a lot of unmentioned backstory going on, and the numerous attempts at making Harry strong/OP or giving him unique magical abilities seems to have backfired into making him a joke to all strong/OP characters ever. Actually, this whole fic is a disgrace to all HP fanfics and you should just rename it to "Animagus Harry Lemons" w/ plot description: Harry is an animagus who can turn into several magical creatures, including a unicorn lord, and he goes around having sex with any female with a pulse-cats and dogs included.
| Guest chapter 38 . 4/18
When will u update
| LeQuin chapter 27 . 4/20
Okay, this is one of the major reasons why I detest writers giving Harry a 'Lordship': the absolute absence of anything resembling an understanding of what the title means or how it is passed on. When someone is 'third in line' that means that they cannot claim the title in question until the two heirs with precedence either abdicate, die or lose their position in the line of succession for some other reason. If this happens you would no longer be 'third in line' though, since the whole point of those words, in that order, is to indicate how many people have a better legal claim to the title.
A lordship is not a fancy way of saying that someone is rich and gets a pretty picture to go with their name. It derives from feudalism and, even today, requires the ruling monarch to grant the title to a family. The title is separate from the family name (so Lord Potter-Black would also be ridiculous) and refers to the administrative, economical and judicial rights to a certain geographical area. Given that at the beginning of the 17th century King James I began targeting "witches" to distract from the homosociality of his court, it is unlikely (read: impossible) that he would allow such political power to reside with a people he was persecuting as they would have been able to raise an army (as his son discovered in the 1640s during the Civil War).
I realise that this is mostly a pet peeve that most of your readers wouldn't even notice, but come on...
| Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 38 . 4/8
Lyaaaaaaaa lo dejas en lo mas emocionante no es justo! Onegaiii vuelve pronto quiero seguir leyendo la continuacion! Quiero saber q mujeres o mascotas se uniran a harry? Los unicornios se dejaran follar?
| Guest chapter 38 . 4/2
I can't wait for the next chapter I enjoy this dark story
| Azrael's Son chapter 38 . 3/19
good story please update soon
| Guest chapter 38 . 3/13
brilliant really enjoyed this its a shame you did not carry on with this story
| jonale.fm chapter 38 . 3/15
Damm gotta wait till the update,... It is a very good fic and gotta say good work on your writing skills
| nitewolf100423 chapter 38 . 3/11
forgot what i am here THIS IS FREAKING AWSOME ARE THIER ANY OTHER STORIES LIKE THIS THAT YOU KNOW OF? I WILL SEND YOU I PM WHEN I GET HOME
| nitewolf423 chapter 37 . 3/11
This is awesome are thier any others similar to this
| nitewolf423 chapter 38 . 3/9
This is awesome
| Guest chapter 32 . 3/6
I'm sorry but your making Harry so hypocritical, don't get me wrong this is a great fic but I believe that he is being a hypocrite getting upset about someone else touching the vixens when he has been saying time and time again that he was going to have them have sex with strangers to get useful info for him. Other than that keep up the good work.
| DarthLeo chapter 16 . 3/2
Why is it purple? XD
| TexasTank chapter 38 . 2/17
I think this is my favorite story of yours. You are doing great. It is a real challenge to keep it up after four year but do keep in the fight. There are probably too many Harry Potter stories out there and this one is one of the most unique. Also, G. Wesley should totally be petted.
| Kingdark chapter 38 . 2/14
I think that, at least for a little while, you should stop focussing on the lemons and getting new girls. Focus a bit on the plot itself, the consequences of Harry's actions. Say, the potions keeping them from pregnancy fail and he's a father several times over. Deal with those consequences. Then add some political intrigue to the plot, losing his political position because several people had been bribed or something.
I mean logically, even 'old' family seats have to be able to be 'expelled' if say, a majority vote is gained. Say that Harry is then forced to flee Hogwarts, losing a lot of his wealth and power, forcing him underground.
Maybe he'll make contact with vampires and werewolves and he could ally with them?
Maybe he'll get contact with a small group of 'dark' wizards that aren't / weren't / would not / align themselves with a wizard that crippled himself with incomplete magic.
Also, some previous scene are coming dangerously close to a rape scene. Maybe Harry should realize that he has gone over that line several times over. If he has 'broken' Daphne and her sister to submit to him every time he 'wants some' that could be of the bad if you know what I mean.
The general idea of the story was fairly unique at the least, given all the mature scenes which are most definitely against the rules, but who care about silly little rules right?
Also, and this suggestion is probably going to be thrown out of the window, but you should consider for a moment that Harry could 'expand' his pack with males as well. Now, don't get me wrong, Harry doesn't have to be intimate with said males, but further down the line, he'll have a bunch of half sisters / daughters that can't breed with each other. You mix a couple of males in that and that wouldn't happen.
Again, that is probably going to make a lot of people go AH NO WAY and RUN AWAY because I'm scared of gays.