Reviews for Animagus Mishap! SLOW UPDATES!
snowballfighter chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
Please do try and save it as it was a good story so far and you could have harry activate the magic debt or something (sorry I forgot what it's called)to get ginny in the harem
MajorChaos13 chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
im looking forward to the rewrite cause some of the plot points were just getting either lost or just become weird. I like harry with darkish tendencies but I found that towards end everything became a bit too animalistic to a point where his mates acted more like slaves than mates. Which doesn't help harry as much in my opinion in the long run. For example with daphne being a pureblood heiress she can and should be a bit stubborn and show harry how she is usefully as is worthy of his respect by helping him with political and sly moves to build up his power. But feel free to go with what you feel is right. Possible name for dragon world could be Dracaris whose people had flee to other dimensions when a group of beta dragons attacked and tried to usurp the sky lord. Theach resulting battle distroyed the balance between the magic and tell elemental islands which ruined the planet
Slytherin-Princess95 chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
I think that maybe it would be a good idea because now that you are older your prospective will have changed. It will be interesting to see the he changes you make if that is what you do. I will be willing to give you my opinion on the chapters in reviews if it will help. The story is great how you have it but there is so many routes you could go with it.
david.teague.3950 chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
I do have a possible idea for the Ginny pet. She finds out Harry has a collection of females including her old friend Luna and is not happy. She successfully sneaks into Snape's potions storage room and steals a vial of Amortentia with the intent to make Harry fall for her and her alone not realizing that due to his Dragon Form he's immune to all mind based manipulations be it potion or spell. When Harry finds out it was her he can call in her life debt and make her his pet.
Lkjfdsa321 chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
You might want to read Rise of the Wizards by teufel1987. It has a lot of really interesting politics toward the middle/end. The only problem with the story is that Hermione gets a pretty bad deal. Other than that it's an excellent story. It also has multiple wives so it might help you decide how to add people.
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
I don't care either way I just want to read a good story so if I can get a good story from the rewrite then that is fine with me
Okami no Shinigami chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
I like the idea behind this story so my thoughts on the rewrite. Luna's intro from the original is perfect. I think the Crimson Vixens should be less bitchy in their approach as they know Harry's personality from Quiddich so possibly have a sisterly thing that becomes more later in the year. the idea of a build up for Sara and her mom is good. I can't really beta till I get a new pc but I'm more than willing to act as a sounding board through calls and emails or PMs to help you develop any ideas from the perspective of a fan of the original story. Feel free to contact me. I'll PM you my email on the Android app just remove the spaces.
darklonerangerdxd chapter 40 . 7/6/2017
Good luck with the rewrite and try to enhance his now 3 forms, somehow as even as a Drakonid, Harry looks kinda weak and not literally but in the other's eyes but still this is a very good fic and look forward to the rewrite.
Djberneman chapter 33 . 7/6/2017
Is Harry connected to the tentacles that he creates so that he feels pleasure through them? That would be great
vincentiusnatalus chapter 40 . 7/5/2017
umm. please dont delete the original story
Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 40 . 7/5/2017
I truly think you should just transfer this to ficrionpress and just remove all reference to Harry Potter, your muse seems to be much more interested in original concepts, characters, plotlines, etc, than in sticking with the Harry Potter world. That is more than okay, creativity is wonderful. That being said, here's the big secret to Harry Potter fanfiction, people read it to read about their favorite characters, and the more you change the world they've come to know and love the less they tend to like it.

The more OCs you introduce, the more outside concepts you use, the less Harry Potter it feels, the more uncomfortable readers get. For example, I have a very VERY hard Knee-jerk reaction to even a small amount of eastern/Asian/anime/manga being added to Harry Potter, it pisses me off, Harry should never wield a katana when he has Gryffindors sword, this is an western fantasy not oriental, when I read stories like that I want to scream.

My suggestion is either rewrite it but expanding on Canon, or else making it an original fiction, but your integrating of original ideas, and so many ideas at that, is just making this story bloated and complicated.

You're a good writer, you just need a good game plan.
kami god shinigami chapter 40 . 7/5/2017
Pleas keep the original up so we can reread it don't take it down like you did for some of the others
harripotterette chapter 40 . 7/5/2017
I do not like the prologue. It's great how we keep learning more and more as the story goes on. I think you should just continue, aside for that last chapter which was a bit weak (compared to usual), the story is great.

It hasn't been going stale, and feeling like you're just writing to finish the story. Rather, you've been continuously been bringing in new elements and twists to keep it new and exciting.

Even regular writers will often have months and even close to a year between chapters, and that's considered acceptable. It's certainly fine for your story, which has "Slow Updates" in the title.

Anyways, good for you! This is one of the better fanfiction I have read.
perseus99 chapter 40 . 7/5/2017
Yes on a reboot. I recommend reading The Engulfing Silence's stories as well as an older story known as Harry Potter and the Elemental's power. the former has a series where Harry seems to take place in the political front and is very Adept while the latter uses a hairy that is cold but can still love his friends. I recommend Dovahlein (thuum for Dragon world) and using an elderscrolls dragon to english translator. Also it would be cool to
Korin Dragoon chapter 40 . 7/5/2017
You could call it Dakyr instead of dragon world. Also Ginny and Fleur and Gabrielle, if you still want to add them to the harem, could be gotten by their life debts. Ginny from the chamber and the veela sisters from the tournament.

Please let me know when you post the fic.
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