sigh .. it was good up til now... all of a sudden all of the people are just retards...

I'll do whatever it takes to take care of both you and my child, it's only you have been a mother to me for all of these years and I just want to say thanks

Well I do deserve the month long detention because I used a paralemouth spell to rip his bones in his arm apart...

I hope that eventually you are able to update this story. Besides the sex scenes, the plot is amazing and makes me wish that the real books could've questioned things the way this Harry does. I know it's been a few years, so it's unlikely you'll see this review... but in the chance that you do, your work is amazing, and if you need assistance in editing, I'm happy to offer my services.

From a very hopeful reader.

So many new words to learn!
Shiddle
Cutching
Grambling
Hutchins

And many, many more

Dude honestly if you just put the first notice about your friend passing I felt bad but after you post 4 chapters in a row about it and telling us if it’s a murder or whatever is just fucking dumb and nobody fucking cares. We don’t know him so we have no feelings towards his death but we would feel bad after the first time you told us but now it’s just seems like you are just asking for attention and for that reason you should just go fuck your self and quit writing

Yep trash fanfic lol what a complete waste of time. Another world? What a dumb fucking author adding that lol quit writing

Yeah Blaise thing was so forced and ruined the story. If it was implied early that he(she) was a Metamorphmagus or that he was an actual she and not just one that is “trapped” in a mans body. So dumb

Ah thank god he’s not getting with Blaise idk it would’ve just felt forced

By far the worst chapter because you made Harry into a stuttering mess and just a bitch

Blaise? No thanks

Bruh wtf why the black guy gotta be gay smh

I love it

And I love it