Reviews for Bad Guy Baking
Aronim chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Good little shot. A few mistakes here and there, but nothing a little proofreading shouldn't fix.

One thing though, I suggest changing it to "Vanellope" instead of "she", right after the "BLEGH", because I got confused and thought that exclamation and the following comment was Calhoun, which, considering the punchline, definitely wasn't the case.
Becky Blue Eyes chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
This story was adorable! Everyone was marvelously in character, and the idea of Ralph making death cookies that Calhoun loves is just awesome. Good story! :D
Kayl chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
HA! I loved it 3
WreckItRalphFan chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
That was so funny! I didn't expect Calhoun to actually like them, and then the little argument between Calhoun and Vanellope about sweets! That was great! Very well written, great job!
BlueJay026 chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Hahaha, awesome! I loved it! I really liked that Calhoun enjoyed the cookies and the bickering between her and Vanellope!

Fantastic job! Keep it up!
Coraline Starr chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Wow, this is so great! You really nailed their personalities! I loved reading this. And...heehee, Cooking Mama! Keep up the great work!
storyman123123 chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
THIS WAS SO GREAT! i just watched the movie yesterday, and i thought it'd be another lame disney movie but it was really in depth, and you captured the characterization of each person almost perfectly. hilarious dialogue, a good plot, great spelling and grammar... you have it all! keep up the great work!
soulful100 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
This was a great story Hope you continue it! Maybe with some of the other characters trying to cook?
Goldenstream Kagamine chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Hahahahaha!
Blak-Ice chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Vanellope is fearless because I'm pretty sure no one is crazy enough (I know I'm not) to insult Sargent Calhoun. Lol. Also, Some one tell Ralph not to cook them for so long!
Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
cookies should (usually) have very little (but still some otherwise it's just bland) I have had a variation of a snickerdoodle that had a lot of salt in it and it was not bad, but the dough tasted better than the finished product, on the other hand the bacon and ginger (as well as the bacon chocolate chip) cookies have a more than average quantity of salt and taste awesome
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
I LAUGHED SO MANY TIMES READING THIS. xD And the last line was perfect; I was thinking of that game through the whole story.
Frozen-Requiem chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
Ralph Cooking Disaster? Or does it? It was a surprise that Calhoun would like Ralph's cookies but nice. Good Work.

I was confused about this sentence:

"Hmm… not bad Wreck-It," said Calhoun, brushed he crumb-dusted hands off on her armor, "Could use a bit more salt, but…"
sparkydreams chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
interesting, funny, but a bit predictable, to me atleast. i knew calhoun would like them when it said she continued chewing. i liked this story, i hope you write more
katgeek chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
XD I liked it.
Wait... "You don't want to throw us out again"?
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