|Reviews for How I Fall Asleep|
| Kathey27 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Yes yes, I wore you down but you didn't put up much of a fight missy! YOU WANTED TO POST THIS AND YOU KNOW IT!
Can I start by saying that I read the warnings this time, slowly and... holy cow. I know, who in the hell am I to talk but... still... this story is going to have me sobbing into my pillow at night, isn't it? ISN'T IT?
This was brilliant. Bloody and gorgeous and amazing and brilliant. The funeral scene? Yeah, I started to sob like I don't even know what. I have such a soft spot for Danny you would not BELIEVE. He needs to become pack, NOW.
I loved the scene with Jackson's parents and how Lydia tells the dad that Jackson loved him and oh god... AKSLKHFJHIUWRHJFNAKMFNSAKFSA ...SO MANY DAMN FEELS! TOO MANY FEELS!
The flashback to his death? Oh god, be still my poor, dead broken heart. It was so... beautiful. That's the only word I have for it. It was great and beautiful and of course he makes jokes and of course it ends like that. I hope she ripped Gerard apart. Slowly.
I love the Lydia/Derek graveyard scene soooo much. It was so raw and SAD. I loved how he was all quiet and calm and there for her.
The school scenes? Perfect. I love the idea of Boyd pulling the fire alarm and all the wolves growling at anyone who tries to get near her. And Stiles' constant talk about the Avengers, I liked how you slipped them in there, much respect. I really liked the bathroom scene too, I love the thought of Erica and Lydia as friends.
ISAAC! ISAAC MY SWEET, SWEET BABY! ARE YOU OKAY?! BECKY DIDN'T PUT YOU THROUGH A LOT OF PAIN DID SHE?! ARE. YOU. OKAY?!... yeah, I love Isaac. He's one of my babies. I love the Isaac and Lydia scenes. They were so sweet and cute and Lydia is such a pack mom. And oh Isaac, sweetie, talking about his brother and how he's like Derek and THAT EXPLAINS SO MUCH I CAN'T EVEN!
Is Lydia his mate? I love mate stories. They make me so warm inside. I mean, they're usually all angsty and sad and whatnot but I love them sooo much. The last scene was great and awesome and funny and they want a bigger room *snicker* and oh Isaac, threatening Derek with Stiles' presence, smart move.
Oh and Becky, don't think I didn't notice you slip in Peter's death in the beginning. I noticed that missy. And Richard Siken, LIKE I WOULDN'T RECOGNIZE THAT LINE. Seriously, I have pretty much all of Crush memorized. It is scary.
All in all, amazing and great and you included two of my favorite songs in here so yay! Skinny Love is a classic and Andrew Belle can do no wrong.
Ohs and the quotes? The first one? Oh Becky, why do you always do this to me?!
| simplysteffv chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I really like your writing. I'm interested to see where you go with this. Great start!
| DoubleDee068 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I love it so far! omg Lydia preggers! man...