Reviews for A Flower Before Luna
fuckyeahfinchel chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
I love Luna and Neville, please update soon! :D
Minna26 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
This is great! :)
Asdfghjkl chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Hey this is an awesome story I especially love how you got the fact that Neville should be able to swear since he's NOT a goody-two-shoes since he you know, KILLED A SNAKE, and I don't know it's not like he BLEW UP A BRIDGE (in the movies) also using the term AU correctly to do whatever you want with the charecters and story, I certainly ope no one embarrasses themselves by saying otherwise to an AU fic.
JeminiaMoon chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
Aww, this was sweet. Neville/Luna isn't my favorite pairing, but I think it's cute, and you pulled it off very well.

Your Neville was perfectly in character (most of the time-see below), especially when he's confronted by Snape, and you captured Luna's absent-mindedness and dreaminess. Well done!

The one thing that seemed off to me, however, was Neville swearing. I just don't think he's that kind of person; he seems more of a goody-two-shoes to me. But otherwise, he was written well.

Some corrections:
['Sorry Sir?' Neville wimpered]-Sir shouldn't be capitalized
['It's a lovely day, isn't it?' Said Luna.]-Said shouldn't be capitalized

-Jemi