|Reviews for Three's a crowd|
| jrutydsbs chapter 1 . 4/8
this is horrible! Sex? Pokémon? how is that appropriate? Come on!
It needs a picture! :P
| Mac chapter 1 . 4/4
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
pretty good but ash's pikachu is female
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
I don't care about lemons, but I care that you glorified rape.
RAPE IS SOMETHING SERIOUS
WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU GLORIFY IT
"raping because of uselessness?!" Do you even know what rape is? How the victims feel afterwards? How traumatizing of an experience it is?
I'm disgusted too that barely anyone has mentioned that. Because you have a sick idea here and not only was this so fucking OOC but it's a slap in the face to rape victims everywhere.
Rape someone because they have a problem with them? That is totally sickening and even if this is just a fanfiction the idea should not come into place.
Rape is not pleasuring, the victim doesn't take it as something nice or "ohh I deserve it omg sex yay"
It is not consensual, and frankly you totally ripped women as well with this. Misty is some submissive mindless victim? How ignorant can you be? She was basically A THING, NOT A PERSON.
no one would react this way
keep your messed up fucking fantasies to yourself
"yeah dont read if you'll be offended."
I don't care about regular lemons, THIS IS SOMETHING I HAVE TO SPEAK UP ON.
Because the ignorance and the rape culture expressed is horrifying and I can't believe you'd write something like this.
| dayday99990 chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Lol pikachu like WAIT FOR ME!
| jr chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
| Kaiser Drake Leone chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Needless to say, awesome lemon. It felt so...graphic. Nothing else to criticize but when someone speaks, start a new paragraph before another speaks. That's all and good luck in the future with all upcoming projects.
Moderator of Pen to Paper
| That dog chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Dafauq did I just read
| codyhobgood271 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
that is what the bitch gets. friend of D.A.L. ()
| Reaper7 chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Heh, and now Pikachu's going to be part of some electro porn or something. Heh, that's a thought. Anyway, it was okay. Not half bad, just a few grammar mistakes. Good job!
| Tiny Devil Girl chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Were u just horny when u wrote this or what?
| flamespirit01 chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
dang roman this is some crazy pokemon stuff but really funny
| Junk Dragon chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Nice and sexy. Thers should be a doujin about it, its so good!
| 101stkillah chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Lol, this reminds me of one of the stories I'd find back in '03. I thought it was pretty funny :)