Reviews for Masks |
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Solange Griffin chapter 2 . 12/4/2018 Young cats love, RAZOR just got a kiss by a pretty she cat. |
Solange Griffin chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 It looked like Jake has a crush on Tawny because she is so beautiful in the whole world. HARD DRIVE got a thing on Tawny . |
DoodleBug chapter 7 . 7/11/2018 I really enjoyed this, Swat Kats fans forever~! |
tealana chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 Wow holy wow. I'm sorry, I had to duck out to grab myself a gigantic glass of milk with bowl of popcorn while reading this as I was lost into the story. Longest chapter I've ever read but dayum awesome fiction. Congratulations tychou :) |
Megakat Salvage chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 I have shared your excellent story for Fanfiction Friday at Jake and Chances Garage on Facebook. |
taziahall chapter 6 . 10/14/2015 P.S. I'm an idiot. I just reread your main FF page and saw you're Ty-Chou on DA. So you DO know me! LOL. Whelp, now I know for sure it's my bed time. Thanks again, darlin'! |
taziahall chapter 7 . 10/14/2015 Hi Ghostie! You don't know me but I read a lot of your Ronin Warriors stories in the past. I almost wet myself to see this Swat Kat story written by YOU! I read it and certainly was not disappointed. All characterizations are spot-on and you have a way of making me love your OCs too so seriously, GOOD JOB. The images were vivid in my mind and you took Viper and what would have been a stale plot and made it a sensory experience. Only thing that bugs me is Jake getting in bed with Tawny like that even though nothing happened. (I have a thing about unmarried people doing stuff like that-I got latent mama-bear instincts, thinking about if this was my kid). I don't think anything would be lost if that scene wasn't there. His developing care for her is pretty apparrent throughout the whole plot. Otherwise, OMG the way T-Bone dropped Tony's boat on his car was priceless. His observation of how the slime of society seems to live large while the good guys have to scrap by rings true to life for a lot of us. I would like to see more mob bosses and crime in Swat Kats. I think it's a type of villainy that could be explored more and I was excited from the story description alone. It was fun seeing the Metallikats show up, they are probably my favorite SK baddies. They bicker like a married couple because they ARE a married couple, lol. Anyway, done gushing. If I had more time in this world, I would have loved to adapt this into a comic. I specialize in that ( ). Anyway, I'm off to nose around in whenever else you wrote, maybe some more Swat Kats. We'll see. Thank you for sharing your awesome writing with us~ |
PrimeReade chapter 7 . 6/12/2015 Well done. You have a very comfortable way of telling a story. I always enjoy reading what you write. |
AkaneKitty chapter 7 . 5/17/2014 I really need to start looking for more fics to read more often. I like this story a lot. Nice action sections and Viper is deliciously creepy. Additionally, I love how you handled Feral's characterization. Boisterous, but competent. Sometimes he doesn't get anything positive and just looks like a yelling incompetent idiot, and the Enforcers as a whole look even worse. Nice to see both Feral and the SWAT Kats stick up for each other at different times. It was also nice to see Felina siding with her Uncle and not be gung ho about the SWAT Kats too. I laughed at her "blondes" comment. Hope to see another SK story from you. |
rinpup14 chapter 7 . 1/16/2014 awesome loved the story |
WillowFaun chapter 7 . 9/26/2013 this was amazing and I have been watching the swat kats every chance I could this is one of the best stories I've read and I love the oc you've created she really reminds me of Cat Woman one more brutal with all the different personalities just wow I absolutely love it and I've bought all the episodes every made though there were only about 25 but still I can't stop watching them they are like batman and robin only cooler, funnier, and the friggin cats! but yeah I can't wait to read the sequel |
Ryu Gabriev chapter 7 . 8/5/2013 Very enjoyable tale. I could really feel the essence of the show in how you pulled this off. Hope you manage to produce more soon. |
An Amber Pen chapter 7 . 7/6/2013 Brilliant! Absolutely bloody brilliant! :D |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/14/2013 Is jake and tawny together or somethin |
MoDaD chapter 7 . 6/9/2013 This chapter would've probably worked well as a stand-alone story. The premise involving the KBI alone is worth further exploration. And, back story isn't all bad, as the plot in Masks really benefited from everyone's motivations and pasts. This was a nice conclusion to the story, though I do wonder what long-lasting effects the situation you've left our protagonists in is going to have on the "normalcy" of their public and private lives from now on. |