|Reviews for Unbeknownst Destiny|
| RID3RLVR chapter 4 . 6/18/2008
I'm so happy I found this! I actually read the first story before, around when it was first posted, but discarded it as I was easily confused and sistracted at the time. I recently started looking for it again, and am happy to say that both this and the other are AMAZING! )
~ Cheers, Ari
| Environmentalist chapter 4 . 2/10/2008
Please continue this! It is very good!
| Techno-Poet chapter 4 . 12/2/2007
I really like the ways the Powers are portrayed in this story, and I think it's interesting how they refer to Ronan as Lugh's heir (well, mainly I think that's interesting because I'm descended from those with the last name Nolan, so I might also be related to Lugh [slim chance of that]).
| lironelle chapter 4 . 8/22/2007
A very interesting and captivating story... I'm definitely enjoying it. I'm very interested to see where this rather strange father-daughter relationship takes you. I also wouldn't mind hearing from the Powers again soon, what they say tends to be very interesting/amusing... I'm sorry about your house by the way. I hope it all gets better soon. Kat
| AppleIceCream chapter 4 . 7/19/2007
Okay, reviewing! Update, please! I'm desperate for more. Wonderful, wonderful writing. I'm already liking this better than Under the Surface. It's got such an air of mystery. Love it.
| Astronomy Geek chapter 4 . 5/19/2006
Hello? Anyone there? Can you please, please update? If you're not going to, please let me know; I have been waiting for a long time now. Anyway, I thought that I'd tell you that your stories are great!
| The Old Rycr chapter 4 . 2/15/2006
This is a good story so far, though I wish you would update it. It hasn't been updated for nearly 3 years!
| bookworm42303 chapter 4 . 12/23/2005
HI, it's me again! I had already reviewed once before, but I wanted to remind you that it has been about 2 years sence you had posted up another ch.! Could you please post them up because a fan is waiting!
P.S. I still think your stories are great!
| bookworm42303 chapter 4 . 12/22/2005
Please write the next ch., because this one was great! I love the way this stroy is going! Write more please!
| Sakiina chapter 4 . 6/11/2005
What about 2 years? I'd like 2 years; it's been 2 years... ::pouts:: This whole "let's get the reader involved and caring about the story and then have the story end abruptly" thing is not working for me...
By way of critique, I think I would have liked a bit more time with Peter and the "significant look" a few chapters back - I thought that sort of encounter was very interesting. Telling how they both recognized his name, or how he reacted in more detail, or having him be more excited and/or nervous when he came back to talk to Nita and Ronan ... that I would have liked. It was missing a bit of expansion that it definitely deserved.
| ORGirl chapter 4 . 11/12/2004
| teky1389 chapter 4 . 7/24/2004
It's next year! Update for crip's sake, I hate suspense... Oh well. Please update if you have the chance :)
| me chapter 4 . 4/6/2004
Wow! I never knew that Fanfiction had Young Wizard Fanfics. I think You did a great job describing everything that happened after the dilema. Also I think that it was a neat twist to have the Lone Power have a child. It's kind of confusing about the Meeting of the Powers in Underneath the surface and this fanfic, but I guess it's suppose to be. Please hurry up and update, I really can't wait!
| Fireblade K'Chona chapter 4 . 10/6/2003
YE! I lurvle! More! Now! *glares mock-sternly*
| Fireblade K'Chona chapter 1 . 10/6/2003