|Reviews for Best Wishes Revised|
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/14
this is stupid
| Aaml mania chapter 16 . 5/11
This chapter is amusing!
Misty is a little bit harsh on bianca ! But thats okay bcoz misty is a feisty one.
| Aaml mania chapter 13 . 5/11
Well i like N ! He is a good man by heart !
| Aaml mania chapter 9 . 5/11
Your battle writing style is amazing !
| Aaml mania chapter 7 . 5/10
This chapter is interesting !
Ash is really dense about girls!
| Aaml mania chapter 4 . 5/10
I really like the bug fear of misty !
| Aaml mania chapter 3 . 5/10
Your battle writing is awesome like watching a battle!
| Aaml mania chapter 2 . 5/10
Well misty deserved oshawott !
Ash should be hard on Trip. Trip is a jerk !
| Aaml mania chapter 1 . 5/10
I have already read this story many time and its a amazing story !
| Ageiko chapter 2 . 5/6
just going to point out that ash getting pikachu is not really a result of him oversleeping, no matter what one of the trainers would be the last one there, it is really due to professor Oak's poor planing skill that ash gets pikachu after all he is the with only 3 starter pokemons when he has scheduled 4 trainers to pick their starters, he should in fact have had 4 set of starter pokemons ready in case they all selected the same starter
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/4
Umm, N does appear in the anime
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/28
N did apear in the show Unova and beyond the name N
| brandonfmanning chapter 20 . 1/10
Dude u wright the best pokemon stories ever I hope u will continue them
| kiwi chapter 61 . 11/4/2014
| dloold87 chapter 27 . 8/13/2014
I always hated Bianca's father. I always thought he has a strange obsession with her, like he enjoyed controlling her. He also constantly put her down and that always pissed me off. I like how you made her tougher, though not necessarily the way you did it. But so far so good on this story.