Reviews for Dark Intervention
b2 chapter 2 . 3/3
Why did u never update! This is some of the bed writing like ever! Please update. The...omg "greed is corrupted love!" My new saying! And the scenes...OMG the scenes. Hot! Love! You are an amazing writer! Please update pretty please!
EveryonesNightmare4 chapter 2 . 7/10/2014
Okay, it's only two chapters but I am so in love with this and I know it's two years too late but I love it. Y w Y Oki, bye bye.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
no update crys ters of sadness i knew it was unlikly but is stille hoped i love your writing it is uterlly breathtaking please never stop writing
Guest chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
hhis is so frsaking good but i noticed u havent updated in awhil are u done is it over i hope not could u let me know mabey if you not gonna but up anymore but it up fro adoption or mabey just put an the end notice up that woullld be sad though because its a great story line with a beutiful wrighter seriously ur wrighting stlye is amazing
Insane-Lane chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Please update.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
oh my god why cant it be a dojinshi why why oh well its so graphic ots basicaly the same thing ive been watching this for a while and if ur not planning on continuing it would u please let youur readers know its rally helpfu nd considerate thibng to do dont get me wrong i love this work and want to see many more chapters to come or just more of ur work cause ur witing is beutiful
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2013
my feeind recomended this to me and dang is it good i really hope there is more
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2013
this story nd your writhing in general beautiful mjxed r18 xontent plot and emotions i loce it ans wiuld like to see more in the fueture hintt hint
Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
nooooooooo i return from my trip only to find gasp no update i thougt you cred sob jk i reeeeeealy hope you updte soon love ur writing (mikuru beam pose) please write soon were all suporting you
piss-poor review chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
MY DEAR FUCK ARTHUR WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU WEREN'T YOU READY TO TEAR GIL AND LUDDY LIMB FROM LIMB AND THEN YOU JUST SEE ALFRED AND 'OOH LOOK AT THE PRETTY BABY' YOU FUCKING LEAVE MATTHEW WITH TWO DEMONS AND FELI YOU KNOW FELI CANT DO SHIT FUCK EVEN GIL SAW MATTIE WAS FUCKING AMAZING AND YOU LITERALLY LEFT HIM TO ROT WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU YOU SHITTY ASSHAT OF AN ANGEL WE BOTH KNOW IF ALFREDO WAS THE ONE LAYING THERE AND DYING YOU WOULD HAVE TOSSED MATTIE INTO LIMBO OR SOMETHING 'WAIT, MATTHEW IM DEALING WITH YOUR DYING BROTHER' BUT NOOOOO YOU PISS-POOR EXCUSE OF ANGEL YOU FUCKING LEAVE MATTIE I BET IGGY'S GONNA REMEMBER MATTIE AND BE LIKE 'OH BLOODY BRITISH FUCK I FORGOT MATTHEW' BUT NOT ANYMORE NOPE NOPE NOW GILBERT IS FUCKING MATTIE RAW AND YOU AINT EVER GOING TO GET HIM BACK AND THAT WAS JUST SUCH A FUCKING PUSSIE-FOOT MOVE AND WHY HOW COULD YOU JUST FLOAT OFF, COOING AND SHIT, LIKE ALFRED WAS ALL THERE WAS TO THE WORLD YOU COULD HAVE WAITED LIKE 5 MINUTES BUT NO. BUT NO. NOW GILBO HAS A FUCKINB ANGELIC MAGICAL LIFE-WORLD-CHANGING MATTIE WHO HE TURNED INTO A SEX SLAVE CHRIST ARTHUR FOR THE QUEENS SAKE WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU YOU EYEBROW TOSSER.

Ugh. You have no idea how upset it makes me when I REALLY think about what Artie did, that douche. Serious, I'm literally tearing up you better update I want a goddamn happy ending I don't care if your fish died or if you're being chased by the Russian Mafia update I am fucking watching I will check this once a week and give you shitty long caps lock reviews if you don't give me what I want. Arthur and Alfred are probably just prancing in heaven and Matt... It just legit makes me mad how stupid that is, like, ridiculous. Not bashing, that is literally what would probably happen, and that just makes me want to bash some heads in.
Piss-poor review chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
OH MY ABSOLUTE FUCK ARTHUR YOU ASSHAT SHITBAG FUCKING BLOODY WANKING TOSSER FOR THE QUEENS SAKE YOU ARE A GODDAMN ANGEL YOU JUST FLOATED OFF, FORGETTING MATTIE WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK HOW CAN YOU DO THAT BABY ALFRED AND WAIT TWO MINUTES SO MATT CAN DIE (kinda) PEACEFULLY ITS JUST GONNA BE LIKE THE ANIME YOU'RE GONNA CODDLE AL THEN LOOK UP AND THINK 'OH BLOODY BRITISH FUCKING HELL I LEFT MATTHEW' AND IM GONNA BE THERE LIKE 'YEP, ASSHOLE' BUT NOW GIL HAS HIM YOU PISS-POOR EXCUSE OF ANGEL ARG HOW DO YOU EVEN DO THAT I BET IF IT WAS ALFREDO LAYING THERE FUCKING DYING YOU WOUKD THROW MATTBOO INTO A RIVER LIKE 'WAIT YOUR TURN' BUT NOT NOW NOOOOOOO NOT ANYMORE GILBERT HAS A FUCKING ANGELIC MAGICAL POWERFUL LIFE-WORLD-CHANGING HUMAN SO YOU CAN SOD OFF YOU FUCKING LIMEY CHRIST WHAT TYPE OF ANGEL ARE YOU
Guest chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
please write more this is hilariouae an amazingly beautiful and deep at the same tie i love it and am begging yu to continue writing its very hard yo find authors this good
afrukingstalker chapter 2 . 6/21/2013
you have a really grear wrighting style and i hope u continue to write this isa gret twist on a classic pairing demonprussia slave!canada please write more i have been reduced to begging TT
Ischemia chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
I love this story so much! Brilliant job! Thank you for writing it!
CatlinP1997 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
Oh god, I love this! Poor Matthew about his answers, and about his brother and father. I really really liked this chapter, and I can't wait for some more! I love stories as this one.
Please update,
Catlin P out.
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