OMG, this was so sweet. I never really thought about how all the chaos of the movie would be viewed if one of the humans were watching. It makes perfect sense, in retrospect, that Mr. Litwak would be in the know though. Glad he came clean in the end.

you my friend made a great story I salute you

Hey, this was actually super good! Good job with this fic!

Yeah, had to reread this fic and love that he braved the weather to save his 'kids' (cause unless he was in dad mode, going out in PJ would be more weird ;) ). Now I want a cold one (Coca~Cola instead of Root Beer for me) but I should be going to sleep... ah well. 10/10

Excellent this is amazing I love this it has me in tears thank you for writing this

Well done. Loved it.

What is Surge Protector(the dude with the clipboard) to the game characters? An alien like human to Vulcan? Or something like a Dwarve to an Elf?

YES! YES! YES! But I think Ralph likes seeing Sugar Rush during the day rather than the shorter trip at night, bet he'd tell him that too if he made that suggestion. I love this and yeah, I'm of the opinion he knows or at least suspects. 10/10

The suspense! Oh MR LITWAK YOU WERE MARVELOUS!

DAHHHH THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY MARVELOUS!

This is beautiful

Pretty good work for a short story this is by far one of the more Unique stories from this fandom I found I like the idea that the owner of your cage did know about the existence of sentence or they find out and he did care for them I have to say I give us a 10 out of 10 I hope more stores will be inspired to be made like this or even this one gets continued I doubt it but I still get this amazing thumbs up great job

This is absolutely brilliant! Well done! *applauds*

I am crying a million tears. Both chapters were beautiful and heartwarming.

This is so freaking touching. The bond between arcade characters and arcade owner is wonderful and your depiction of his life is very sympathetic and realistic. This story is a masterpiece.