|Reviews for Fool's Paradise|
| Nyx811 chapter 27 . 7/9/2014
love this story update again soon
| DarkShell chapter 24 . 2/1/2014
Another awesome chapter :) I've been following this story for a while in AO3 where I don't have an account, and I was extatic find it here as well. (Now I can add it to my favs!) So, that's the first time I'm reviewing.
I really love your characterisations, the light writing style, the easy and somewhat soft interactions among the crew. And Spin'. You've just got to love Spin' if you write him so adorkable Always had a soft spot for that nutty doc-bot. I find the scene where he takes Krok from Misfire's arms very touching, in a sort of caring/slightly possessive/still sweet way. One of the best scenes in the story so far. Love how you're treating the character's emotions - instead of succumbing to melodrama, you just lightly sketch their feelings; a tap on the shoulder here, a coupe of well-chosen words there, and there's no doubt left that those feelings are really there.
I'm a little confused right now about Dent?Prowl. Do I feel a major plot twist comming up? :)
Anyways, keep up the good work! This awesome fic is always worth the wait.
| Foxyperv chapter 19 . 10/4/2013
ah! I smell something!
it's either BROTP or OTP, we'll see as it unfolds XD
I'm liking this more and more
I'm really glad I've embarked on this with you
can't wait to read some more!
| Foxyperv chapter 16 . 10/4/2013
I actually passed this one by accident
and i'm glad I noticed it quickly because OH PRIMUS THE LAUGHTER
Grimsie wants to be bathed by his mumm- errr, by Fulcrum XD
| Foxyperv chapter 17 . 10/4/2013
ooooh! so the Raider thing is NOT done
that IS weird, though, now that Crankcase mentions it:
WHY would he run after Fulcrum this way? it IS a lot of trouble for a simple K-class...
once again, you got me hooked!
P.S: and about Misfire's hallucination: you got no idea how happy it made me to learn it WAS a Deadpool reference!
| Foxyperv chapter 10 . 10/3/2013
REALLY interesting chapter here
I like how you let some typos, which kinda made the brain go "...what?" then it escalated and it evne changed it's way of writing
and all this diving into Misfire's psyche
real interesting, really really interesting!
| Foxyperv chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
so Barracks knows Fulcrum, right?
and Spinister knows Spoilsports...
we're gonna see more of them
gotta say, I'm real impressed by your writing and pacing!
| Foxyperv chapter 6 . 10/3/2013
Misfire's crush really is hilarious to read about
and I just LOVE how Fulcrum takes care of Grimlock
| Foxyperv chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
okay, so I curiously peek at this after I see a fanart back on DA
and I'm SUCKED into it!
this is really good! I'm gonna enjoy it, I can feel it!
btw, the Misfire illusion: reminds me of Deadpool and Cable XD
| youllbeinmyheart1997 chapter 14 . 8/9/2013
The Scavengers are the most dysfunctional team I've ever seen, but somehow, it all works out! Good job!
| ZephyrX9 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
ME GRIMLOCK BADASS.
Anyways, great chapter! Does need a little narrative work, tho.
| BlueInked chapter 8 . 2/11/2013
Awesome! Love your characterisations, love the Scavengers in general now. Could have done without Misfire's illusion, but I seem to be alone in this fandom in being against all pairings ever. I am morbidly curious as to how Crankcase would look with a frilly, floral patterned helmet...
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/31/2012
This fic is wonderful, really! Please don't stop *_*
| Jittery Robot chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
This chapter was just too darn cute! I love Misfire’s playful antics, even if it’s at Fulcrum’s expense. Poor Fulcrum, ever since Misfire discovered his weakness, he’s been using it against him ever since. I should feel sorry for him, but I don’t since it makes for fun interactions between my two favorite Scavengers.
I’m really glad you’ve been writing more for this story. It’s so much fun to read. Keep up the great work!
| Jittery Robot chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
I meant to review this chapter much sooner, but didn’t really get the chance to until now. I really enjoyed this little adventure. Each of the illusions the Scavengers went through were both interesting and believable. Although I don’t know which one made me laugh more; Misfire’s questionable illusion involving Fulcrum (is that a pairing I see in the future?), or Spinster‘s… er… whatever the hell that was. I have to agree with Misfire. It explains so much and yet so little. Also, I just want to add that Grimlock being like the Scavenger’s pet is just too adorable. He’s like a giant puppy.