Reviews for Fool's Paradise
Thor-Born chapter 30 . 9/11/2015
Jeez this story... why aren't more people reading this? its AMAZING! I have openly laughed several times, something I might add that takes alot to do. I love how the characters develop and interact around each other, adapting and changing and how well you tell this untold story. What I really don't like about IDW so far is that recently, all we see are the Autobots, and how they are doing after the war. The Scavangers are a group I really like because of how dis-functional they should be, yet they work so well together, plus its a side of the story so rarely told, with the war over, what happens to the grunts?
I must admit I truly admire your ability to suck me in to the story and get me addicted... its just wonderful, Dark when its meant to be, funny when it should be, and even on the odd occasion heart-warming.
I love Misfire and Spinster, those two are so entertaining, and Dent, For a time I was really worried that you were going to just kill him of or leave him with Phrama, because in just his first introduction I couldn't help but like the guy. I am also impressed at your ability to scrounge up things I honestly did not expect to see much of MagmaBoss being a prime example.
I really hope this is continuing because I would love to see and read more.
Nyx811 chapter 27 . 7/9/2014
love this story update again soon
DarkShell chapter 24 . 2/1/2014
Another awesome chapter :) I've been following this story for a while in AO3 where I don't have an account, and I was extatic find it here as well. (Now I can add it to my favs!) So, that's the first time I'm reviewing.

I really love your characterisations, the light writing style, the easy and somewhat soft interactions among the crew. And Spin'. You've just got to love Spin' if you write him so adorkable Always had a soft spot for that nutty doc-bot. I find the scene where he takes Krok from Misfire's arms very touching, in a sort of caring/slightly possessive/still sweet way. One of the best scenes in the story so far. Love how you're treating the character's emotions - instead of succumbing to melodrama, you just lightly sketch their feelings; a tap on the shoulder here, a coupe of well-chosen words there, and there's no doubt left that those feelings are really there.

I'm a little confused right now about Dent?Prowl. Do I feel a major plot twist comming up? :)

Anyways, keep up the good work! This awesome fic is always worth the wait.
Foxyperv chapter 19 . 10/4/2013
ah! I smell something!
it's either BROTP or OTP, we'll see as it unfolds XD
I'm liking this more and more
I'm really glad I've embarked on this with you
can't wait to read some more!
Foxyperv chapter 16 . 10/4/2013
I actually passed this one by accident
and i'm glad I noticed it quickly because OH PRIMUS THE LAUGHTER
Grimsie wants to be bathed by his mumm- errr, by Fulcrum XD
Foxyperv chapter 17 . 10/4/2013
ooooh! so the Raider thing is NOT done
that IS weird, though, now that Crankcase mentions it:
WHY would he run after Fulcrum this way? it IS a lot of trouble for a simple K-class...
once again, you got me hooked!

P.S: and about Misfire's hallucination: you got no idea how happy it made me to learn it WAS a Deadpool reference!
Foxyperv chapter 10 . 10/3/2013
REALLY interesting chapter here
I like how you let some typos, which kinda made the brain go "...what?" then it escalated and it evne changed it's way of writing
and all this diving into Misfire's psyche
real interesting, really really interesting!
Foxyperv chapter 7 . 10/3/2013
so Barracks knows Fulcrum, right?
and Spinister knows Spoilsports...
we're gonna see more of them
gotta say, I'm real impressed by your writing and pacing!
Foxyperv chapter 6 . 10/3/2013
Misfire's crush really is hilarious to read about
and I just LOVE how Fulcrum takes care of Grimlock
Foxyperv chapter 3 . 10/3/2013
okay, so I curiously peek at this after I see a fanart back on DA
and I'm SUCKED into it!
this is really good! I'm gonna enjoy it, I can feel it!

btw, the Misfire illusion: reminds me of Deadpool and Cable XD
youllbeinmyheart1997 chapter 14 . 8/9/2013
The Scavengers are the most dysfunctional team I've ever seen, but somehow, it all works out! Good job!
ZephyrX9 chapter 1 . 3/20/2013

Anyways, great chapter! Does need a little narrative work, tho.
BlueInked chapter 8 . 2/11/2013
Awesome! Love your characterisations, love the Scavengers in general now. Could have done without Misfire's illusion, but I seem to be alone in this fandom in being against all pairings ever. I am morbidly curious as to how Crankcase would look with a frilly, floral patterned helmet...
Guest chapter 4 . 12/31/2012
This fic is wonderful, really! Please don't stop *_*
Jittery Robot chapter 4 . 12/30/2012
This chapter was just too darn cute! I love Misfire’s playful antics, even if it’s at Fulcrum’s expense. Poor Fulcrum, ever since Misfire discovered his weakness, he’s been using it against him ever since. I should feel sorry for him, but I don’t since it makes for fun interactions between my two favorite Scavengers.

I’m really glad you’ve been writing more for this story. It’s so much fun to read. Keep up the great work!
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