|Reviews for Tip of the Spear|
| Dazzlingsparkle chapter 5 . 8/20
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/31
Hahaha. I'm wondering if either of them are even pronouncing the Hawaiian words correctly!
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/29
If they're staying in Kona, why not fly straight to that airport? Why go to Hilo?
And why not try any local foods? Pizza hut? Spaghetti? They wanted adventure, but they're not eating anything local!
| pinkshoes81 chapter 37 . 6/16
Loved it, thanks for sharing x
| karenIreland chapter 37 . 6/6
| Lady Moon Shadows chapter 5 . 5/29
How is it that he was 28 years old in the prologue and then 3 years later he is 33 almost 34 years old?
I love how fearless Bella is. She's faced the unthinkable and is now ready to live life to the fullest.
| freedom2604 chapter 37 . 5/24
Omg this is an awesome story, I read it from start to finish without stopping. one of the best for sure! I've enjoyed and loved a lot every minute of it.
Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Ps: sorry but my inglish sucks (n.n)
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/4
I'm just appalled that they're in Hawaii and they're eating things like McDonald's and Subway.
EAT LOCAL FOODS!
| Guest chapter 37 . 4/2
A fabulous and heartfelt tour through the military with Edward and Bella. Humorous and grounded. Loved it.
| ninny 1 chapter 37 . 2/28
This was wonderful thoroughly enjoyed every word
| ninny 1 chapter 35 . 2/27
A wonderful HEA thank you for this tale
| ninny 1 chapter 11 . 2/19
Wonderful I enjoyed their first date immensely
And every one of your wonderful words
| ninny 1 chapter 10 . 2/19
Wow so good
| Paty T chapter 37 . 2/11
Fabulosa historia! Gracias por compartir
| Deb chapter 1 . 1/21
Very impactful set up to the story.