Reviews for The Storm
Meester chapter 3 . 12/26/2012
This story is good, I really like it. You're a talented writer. But being hispanic, I do have to say the Spanish is a bit incorrect, but its okay, because I can guess what you're trying to say.
domo2010 chapter 6 . 12/22/2012
I love your story! I didn't comment until now because I wanted to read all of it first. Please update soon!
flor.molina16 chapter 3 . 11/26/2012
Ahhhhhhh! This is soo different ((: awesome story3
ShiloCoulter chapter 4 . 11/25/2012
Violet is such a stupid bitch!
whatadreamer chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
really interesting so far, hope you continue this story !
Rikku94 chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
I like the story so far, keep up the good work. My spanish is a little rusty, but some of the words in your story didn't sound right. I would look into that. Other than that good story so far. c:
Mafer Longbottom-Hudgens chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
Hola!
It's great to find a story where they speak spanish.
I'm from México and I love your fic 3
But... I don't know what kind of translator you use but some words aren't ok.

we don't said "usted" it's too formal. I think "usted" is used in Colombia to speak with normal people (like daugther and fathers, or friends or police) but in Spain and Latin America we use "tú".

And in the first chapter, I don't know what you try to said when you wrote on spanish.
Keep with this story is amazing ;D