Reviews for Innocence Is A Mask
Mrs.Mellark15 chapter 14 . 2/1/2013
I'm sorry I forgot why is the skoll again ?
Just Smudge chapter 14 . 2/1/2013
Clever! Yay! Why don't you make Katniss find out about the Skoll during her time in the Games? It could explain her hostility.
gabz1197 chapter 11 . 1/29/2013
you could make that the reason prim is reaped? Or get the teachers to double the homework so the skoll is forced to go out of bussiness? Or put a ban on cats...
Just Smudge chapter 13 . 1/31/2013
Yay! Good job! I loved this one, you had a lot more detail! Hey, you know what I noticed? During the 75th games, when the bombings happened, Katniss' family was saved because they lived in the Victors Village, but Peeta's died, even though they did too...
Anyways, I loved it, I think bringing in the Games will give it a whole new element!
Just Smudge chapter 12 . 1/29/2013
Prim's reaction! Then the Games.
Mrs.Mellark15 chapter 12 . 1/29/2013
Just Smudge chapter 11 . 1/29/2013
More Katniss? Have things about the Games- Snow will be averted, and play more attention to the Games.
katie x chapter 10 . 11/23/2012
This book is getting better and better poor prim with lyna and all that x ! please update soo x
freya x chapter 2 . 11/21/2012
This books great please update sooooooon xxxxxx
peetniss 4 eva chapter 9 . 11/21/2012
Hiya! I really like your story! For lyna's plan c, she could pretend to be a customer at the skoll and then like ask loads of "casual" questions about it to a weaker member of it! Hope you lilk eit! Xoxox
Just Smudge chapter 9 . 11/21/2012
Stealing all homework done by the Skoll before they get the chance to hand them out? Trashing the place? ACTUALLY calling the authorities?
Just Smudge chapter 8 . 11/14/2012
Can somebody really go insane from that?
forevergurl23 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
seriously...this fiction was the best one you wrote. it also had the best name! i loved it!
Just Smudge chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
It's fine, I understand :)
I still don't get Lyna's motives for revenge though. Seriously, couldn't they try to make up? She's got her priorities all wrong!
Just Smudge chapter 6 . 11/13/2012
Year 7 now?Are you still 12 or are you 13 yet? And dont worry about the ex boyfriend- youll find somebody else. Besides, you are only young! Im older than yiu and I havent had a boyfriend yet!
Yes, Lyna should be a spy. It makes sense! Good job!
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