Reviews for Things We Do For Love
Nimbus2023 chapter 23 . 2/13/2024
I'm pulling for a surprise romance with Tonks after this chapter. I honestly don't have any respect for this version of Daphne and I have little interest in them getting together. I am almost hoping Daphne redeems herself by giving her life to save Harry in a tragic fashion and Harry ends up marrying Tracy at the end of the story
Nimbus2023 chapter 23 . 2/13/2024
Sirius was in prison for twelve years, not fifteen. He was imprisoned sometime after the events of Godrics Hollow probably in early November of 1981 and escaped sometime in the summer of 1993 so it was actually closer to 11 1/2 years.
Nimbus2023 chapter 20 . 2/13/2024
Hermione dated Dean and Lee?
Nimbus2023 chapter 20 . 2/13/2024
Harry would be much better off with Tonks in a bikini than with Daphne who sold him out to Voldemort.
Nimbus2023 chapter 18 . 2/13/2024
He really should be that selfish and just let them have her take the prophecy and run.
Nimbus2023 chapter 17 . 2/13/2024
If Harry gets out of this I hope he ditches that duplicitous bitch.
Nimbus2023 chapter 16 . 2/13/2024
I'll go out on a limb and guess that Thorton is the rapist.
Nimbus2023 chapter 16 . 2/13/2024
Rationalize it all you want but the bottom line is that your characters only have a spine when it is convenient to the plot. Daphne should have cursed Malfoy instead of clam up, her character thus far is that she reacts with irrational anger and I would hazard a guess that learning her sister had been beaten and raped would have triggered that particular emotion. No, the Malfoy arc feels contrived like you forced events to go in a certain direction whether it was logical or not.
Nimbus2023 chapter 13 . 2/13/2024
Alright, what was the point of removing Umbridge if you're just going to keep her spirit alive in Thorton?
Nimbus2023 chapter 12 . 2/13/2024
Barnabus the Barmy was a tapestry not a portrait.
Nimbus2023 chapter 11 . 2/13/2024
Draco and Blaise's different perspectives cracked me up. I just wish the two timelines would sync up already and finish out the backstory. Truthfully I don't see the appeal for Harry. Sure Daphne looks alright but she has the personality of a blast-ended skrewt. Why would he continue to pursue her with the way she acts unless Harry really is a shallow person?
Nimbus2023 chapter 5 . 2/12/2024
I think that you have quite thoroughly emphasized the fact that Daphne expresses no emotion. I saw a dozen references to it since the story began so accept that the readers understand that Daphne is cold and you know... move on.
Nimbus2023 chapter 4 . 2/12/2024
Harry's irrational anger comes off as annoying. I get he's upset with the injustices heaved on his shoulders by the ministry but he was giving Umbridge exactly what she wanted by screaming accusations in Dumbledore's office, his accusations against Umbridge would have been more meaningful if he hadn't worn his emotions on his sleeve and presented his case with a bit more tact. On the plus side, I am glad that you decided to get rid of Umbridge early on it's a welcome change from the Legacy Preservation Act where it seemed like Umbridge was a constant pebble in Harry's shoe.
Nimbus2023 chapter 3 . 2/12/2024
Wow a lot of innuendo in this chapter, is Johnson as good as Wood? Survey says... Both captains have last names that are slang for a penis and in their own way they both act like dicks in their pursuit of the Quidditch cup, I wonder if that was intentional on J.K.R's part or it was just a lucky coincidence.
Nimbus2023 chapter 3 . 2/12/2024
I heard that there are two types of people out there, those that masturbate and liars. I guess this version of Harry Potter falls into the latter category because I find his statement utterly ludicrous.
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