Reviews for Things We Do For Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It would have been more satisfying if Harry had just punched Seamus instead of going for his wand. If he was close enough to shove him then he was close enough to knock him the fuck out so why bother going for a wand? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly ngl. I think its highly unrealistic for them to get back together after everything. Perish the thought of them just remaining friends though I guess. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Laughed out loud at this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking phenomenal story. I am now going to look at your other published stories because this was incredible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, Why didn't Albus just jump through the floo to the Hogs Head? Then his brother could have contacted everyone |
![]() ![]() ![]() A typo, "Achilles Heal " should be Achilles Heel". |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few typo's, "the other thre adults", should be "the other three adults", "as this Harry potter", should be "as this Harry Potter", "you will be brought the next afternoon"., should be "you will be brought home the next afternoon" and, "the thre adults turned", should be "the three adults turned". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mr. Spooky, I enjoy you writing and have read many of your stories. This one is great. I think there are more spelling errors than usual. That may be attributed to a lack of beta readers though. Thank you for your contributions to this site. John |
![]() ![]() ![]() A brilliant story |
![]() ![]() ![]() not into the tracey hermione thing. disappointing. whatever. this story is about haphne anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() harry acknowledging yearly meeting with voldemort... sounds like a yearly meeting with your office ceos for performance review... |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... one moment it was all fluffy, and then suddenly the flobberworms has hit the fan... poor astoria... |
![]() ![]() ![]() harry be like "expelliarmus is probably one of the most basic stupid spell, but it can sometimes save your life" while severus begrudgingly gives a thumbs up in the background, and maybe lockhart too in his ward doing his autograph in form of a thumbs up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gyahaha... daphne pointing her toothbrush menanicingly towards tracey was just a tota I. |
![]() ![]() ![]() neville in police uniform be smirking in victory as he caught harry peeking at girls. "mr. potter. you are busted". |