Reviews for A Riddled Universe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This one of the most beautiful fics i've ever read |
![]() ![]() Wow! I loved this story. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() Here and once previously talking about Barty Jr, you called him "Unspeakable #1". I think you mean "Undesirable #1". Unspeakable is the job title, Undesirable is his wanted poster. |
![]() ![]() I know this review is YEARS too late, but don't think I missed your Lion King reference in chapter 28. It was brilliantly done too. I admire your meticulous planning. (Dyino02 at g mail) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Outstanding! One of the most original story lines I've seen in fanfic. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simplemente ESTRAORDINARIO. Muchas gracias por compartir esta historia! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Apparently, I've read this story four years ago, but I don't remember it. I enjoyed reading it anew. This is what I tried to post after the last chapter: A rare and beautiful story. I wish I knew how Myrtle became a squib, why she hated Dorcas. I wonder why you never mentioned Riddled Peter. But, altogether, wonderful. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you SO MUCH! This has been absolutely amazing! I love your Tom, and his thoughts and his principles! I love the Riddle Family! I wish Tom had somehow reassured Sirius of his place in it but either way everything was amazing! Thanks again xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah I adored this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *ques the "Oh Snap" vine* |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's more decent than 99. 9% of the works out there. Actually convincing and believable. No one is out of character. Healer Riddle despite his being a good guy is still largely being Tom Marvalo Riddle with a heart and a sarcastic attitude. |
![]() ![]() I like what you are trying, it is original which is certainly points to you, but the writing is only okay and the dialogue mediocre. Still, I am trying to enjoy it. Small piece of advice, if one of your characters is supposed to be a genius, clever, even manipulative, writing from their perspective gets much more difficult and you really have to show them being clever/w.e. or use some movie magic to make their thinking and dialogue stand out from the rest. Honestly this riddle so far has come off as b grade Snape in terms of wit, and a young malfoy in terms of attitude, and no amount of telling us he can and does great things will make up for atleast trying to show him differently. Dont take this as a flame pls, i appreciate your creativity and your effort in writing this but sometimes you have to sit down and ask yourself "how would this great person react differently from the average person?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found this fic a week ago and I love it so much! The plot is well-thought, the charactes are well written and the ending was perfect. I loved Harry and Riddle so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! What happens to Ginny in the end? |