Reviews for Simple Words
CrypticRebel chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
Cute that's all I can say!
Runawynd chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
This was so CUTE! 3 I loved how you wrote Rush, he was so believable and in-character I could TOTALLY picture him writing a note like that! So adorable! Thanks so much for the read!
Marli-chan Tuchanka chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Suuuuuuper cute! X3
PanDitty chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I'm still new to The Last Remnant, but I'm happy to see that there are some David x Rush fanfiction on the internet. I adore fluffy stories, and this one was a read that I am happy to add to my favorites. Please keep up the good work. I really enjoyed it!
MsSupreme chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Awwwwww :') Proper sweet :D
mimic shalle chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
New blood! Flashes fangs at you!

I kid.

Anyway, for the actual review. The oneshot, to sum it, was nice. There's too little to give something more intensive, but I'll just comment on this: "a form of a chuckle bubbling in his chest." Did you mean, 'a chuckle bubbled from his chest'? If so you don't need to add superfluous words to it. It gives off a feeling that you're trying too hard, you know?

It had been a nice read. Will there be more?

-mimic